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Discussion of "Come Back" by kyletissue


1 hebe6405 5 years, 9 months ago Reply

Present tense is hard for me to read and enjoy. Following someone (apparently) aimlessly traveling is even harder for me to read. I had read the end several times and I still don't understand what was going on... I missed the transition from the church to the bus. Too esoteric, I didn't understand.


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2 kyletissue 5 years, 9 months ago Reply

Thanks for your feedback =]


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