Discussion of "Come Back" by kyletissue
hebe6405 8 years ago
Present tense is hard for me to read and enjoy. Following someone (apparently) aimlessly traveling is even harder for me to read. I had read the end several times and I still don't understand what was going on... I missed the transition from the church to the bus. Too esoteric, I didn't understand.
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kyletissue 8 years ago
Thanks for your feedback =]
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