Discussion of "Surviving Life: Chap 1 -- Bobby: When I Came Home" by ksweaver

1		dogdeity11 2 years ago Reply ksweaver~ I really enjoyed this chapter. Great character builds and drama. I was surprised to see his mother treat him like that! I’m anxious to find out what happened to DA3. Really good writing.
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1		writerwannabe 2 years ago Reply Very, very good lead chapter, ksweaver. I really like your characters, including the enigmatic DA4. Your dialogue works really well with limited narrative to carry the storyline. Really well done!
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