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"New Project!!! Quickie"

Not As It Seems  by kokomorose

     She had waited ten long years for this day, the day he finally asked her the biggest question a relationship could have. This was their 10th Valentine's day together, they had started dating back at the High School Valentine's Day Dance. She was dressed in her best little black dress, waiting for him. He had told her he had something big to ask her. Finally the moment of truth. The love of her life knocked on the door. Answering it, he looked so nervous, almost sad, she figured that was to be expected. Arriving at the restaurant, they were seated, as they ate, He sspoke to her in what seemed to sound like a foreign language. "I want out of this relationship, I've found someone else." Her world shattered, Without a word, she walked herself home. Returning home, she went to her room and thought, This? This is what I've waited ten years for? He's my everything, and always has been! What now? What to do? Move on? Fight to get him back? Why? So many questions tormented her, so many unknown things haunted her thoughts. Finally giving up, she closed the door to her room, and her heart forever. . .

 

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Date created: Sept. 2, 2010
Date published: Sept. 2, 2010
Comments: 0
Tags: hate, love, valentines
Word Count: 230
Times Read: 259
Story Length: 2
Children Rank: 2.0/5.0 (1 votes)