Discussion of "October Chill: Photograph" by kellygreenninja

1		dogdeity11 5 months, 2 weeks ago Reply Wow! I was totally blown away by this. Really wonderful second chapter. Your sentences and word usage are beautiful. I found myself with chills several times...as a result of your chilling and vibrant descriptions. Excellent job. One of the most creative and unique second chapters to the October Chill original. I voted you a five.
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1		honeygloom 5 months, 2 weeks ago Reply Beautifully written. You did an excellent job carying the somber and tense mood throughout and your word choice really made the piece flow.
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1		honeygloom 5 months, 1 week ago Reply Hi Kellygreenninja! Can you email me at deityhoney11@live.com? I want to ask you about submitting a story for a project dogdeity11 and I are working on. Thanks! HG
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