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Discussion of "Raindance" by katica_locke


1 hebe6405 2 years, 4 months ago Reply

Very well written. The setting and circumstances are excellently constructed. The... relation between the characters doesn't interest me; but the writing is crafted to such a degree that I continued to read. Nice job.


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1 writerwannabe 2 years, 4 months ago Reply

Wow! and Welcome to SM, katica!

As hebe commented, this is very well written. Excellent plotting and characterization. Dialogue was spot on and the mix of story and eroticism was tastefully done.

Regardless a person's ideas of homosexuality and to paraphrase The Cable Guy..."that was well written, I don't care who you are, that was well written." ;o)


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