Discussion of "A Solitary Flame - Ch. 1" by katica_locke

This was a great story, but if I read the tags that have nothing to do with the story before reading it, I more than likely wouldn't have touched it.

Thanks, I think. Yeah, I guess some of those tags don't pertain to this chapter, but there's more of the story, and they will, so I was giving advanced warning.

Thanks for the comment.

This was interesting, really good writing, you have a handle on movement and narrative, and I completely trust the author ... in that, I suppose, you won't throw me for any turns or implausibilities. A completely great start that doesn't give too much, but introduces us to a character and a world I think have real potential.