Discussion of "Tower Power" by justhoff

not sure where this is headed... so the content is hard to comment on. There's not enough information to figure out who the characters are or what their doing. Right now, it's like reading a random thought, or like picking up a piece of paper that's been torn up and you only can read a few words of a note that you know must be much longer.

eeeks... should read: or what they're doing
I obviously wasn't paying attention to what I was doing...