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Discussion of "On the Fence" by justhoff


2 honeygloom 2 years, 8 months ago Reply

This is a little confusing, but I think I get the gist of it. It's a great premise, but it could be clearer whether or not the blond woman is his ex-wife. Otherwise great job:)


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1 justhoff 2 years, 8 months ago Reply

Thanks for the useful comment.


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