Discussion of "On the Fence" by justhoff
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honeygloom 2 years, 8 months ago
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This is a little confusing, but I think I get the gist of it. It's a great premise, but it could be clearer whether or not the blond woman is his ex-wife. Otherwise great job:) |
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justhoff 2 years, 8 months ago
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Thanks for the useful comment. |
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