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justhoff	Date Joined: May 7, 2008 Last Login: June 23, 2010

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1		justhoff 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context Thanks both of you.
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1		justhoff 2 months, 3 weeks ago Context Wonderful description.
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2		justhoff 2 months, 3 weeks ago Context Wonderful description.
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1		justhoff 2 months, 3 weeks ago Context I'd like to find out what she has also. Way to keep my interest.
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1		justhoff 2 months, 3 weeks ago Context A point-of-view trip worth taking.
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1		justhoff 2 months, 3 weeks ago Context Nicely done.
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1		justhoff 2 months, 3 weeks ago Context Keep writing.
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1		justhoff 1 year, 3 months ago Context I would like to see more description.
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1		justhoff 1 year, 3 months ago Context Thanks for the useful comment.
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2		justhoff 1 year, 3 months ago Context Very nice descriptions.
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14 Chapters by justhoff

"How the Girl Crossed the Road" by justhoff

3.6/5.0 - published Jun 13, 2010 - 3 comments (preview)

She stepped into the street for the first time. It was a long way down the curb, like stepping off a cliff into a blackness. The cars looked like enlarged metal statues rolling along; creatures left behind by even larger, scarier metal beasts.
Tags: adventure, girl, road

"Little Sleuth - part 2" by justhoff

3.4/5.0 - published Jun 07, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)

The little sleuth follows his mother into Pittsburgh.
Tags: detective, historic, pittsburgh, train, travel

"Little Sleuth" by justhoff

4.3/5.0 - published May 31, 2009 - 3 comments (preview)

As a child I read a lot of detective stories and detective comics...
Tags: detective, pittsburgh, sleuth

"Remembering the Note" by justhoff

3.7/5.0 - published May 22, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)

There were a lot of things I could have done after reading the note. But I followed the instructions perfectly.
Tags: car-chase, ice-cream, note

"On the Fence" by justhoff

3.7/5.0 - published May 16, 2009 - 2 comments (preview)

He stood before the house with his arms slung over the white fence, beginning to tingle from pinched nerves and blood vessels. In the upstairs window, a woman in a blue-silk night gown sat before a row of bright lights putting on make-up.
Tags: blonde, daemon, ex-wife, fence, past

"The Catch" by justhoff

3.7/5.0 - published May 10, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)

Brad rushed to the edge of the warning track, looked up to the jumbotron, took a step, and lept.
Tags: baseball

"Backyard Coyotes" by justhoff

3.5/5.0 - published Sep 14, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)

They moved into our backyard the summer before eight grade – nature had nowhere else to put them. Dad wanted to shoot them with the shotgun, but Momma said he fire a weapon in town.
Tags: animal, backyard, coyotes, nature, small-town

"Tower Power" by justhoff

3.7/5.0 - published Aug 08, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)

Michael was a Green Spacer; he was there at the grand opening of Ronauldi Tower. He was watching the other side of the street very curiously as they moved slowly, monotonously. Peeking in and out from behind other heads was one he recognized...

"Two Years Later" by justhoff

4.2/5.0 - published Jun 04, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)

Two years later, Everything was found walking about of the Betty Ford Clinic with the spoon-player rolling behind. When asked why he was inside he said, "It was the Rolling Stones thing to do."