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justhoff

Date Joined: May 7, 2008
Last Login: Dec. 25, 2012

37 Comments by justhoff

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1 justhoff 2 years, 4 months ago Context

That's depressing. Good job bringing the reader into the emotion of the scene.


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

Tommy will haunt my nightmares. Nice work.


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

So that's how ants feel. Nice scene,


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

The descriptions really pulled me into the scene quickly. Nice writing.


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

Someone write the next chapter so we can find out what the plans were for!


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

Inspirational! Need to get writing.


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

I like the part about wanting to sit with the chickens. Makes you wonder...


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

Sad story.


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

Nice descriptions.


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1 justhoff 2 years, 5 months ago Context

Great opening hook. Intrigued at the start.


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