Discussion of "Getgo" by joeqcamel

Great continuation! I love the tension you’ve created between father and son. And I like that, on the surface, the father seems to just hate what he doesn’t know, but then his comments at the end speak more toward some hidden experience. Nice work:)

I like the way you flirt with anachronisms without pinning the story down to a particular place or time. You've also set up a great beginning, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Terrific opening chapter. A fair amount of details was given in order for the next author to really dig in and set this off.

Not too bad at all. Well done. ;-)