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Discussion of "The Face in the Mirror" by jermccloud


2 ocmusicman 7 months ago Reply

NICE!!!!
I like it!
The studdering problem Henry has from the drug works, it creates tension in the communication between the two of them.
The mirror is a great twist!
The other thing is, now that you have established that Henry is the one with the speach impediment, you really don't need to use the "Henry said" tags nearly as much.
I like where this is headed....


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2 theblackhand 7 months ago Reply

Again, great story. I will continue to follow you and ocmusicman. I asked him if he wanted to collabo on a story together. I am asking you as well. Get back with me, and read my work when time permits....


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2 ocmusicman 7 months ago Reply

Jermccloud,
I added another chapter, I hope I did you justice...


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1 jermccloud 7 months ago Reply

Good work! Loved it! I already added to your chapter, hope it works out.


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1 ocmusicman 7 months ago Reply

I like your addition... I just put up another one.
I left it hanging on the end, it could go either way... Your Choice


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