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jermccloud

Real Name: Jeremy McCloud
Date Joined: Jan. 14, 2008
Last Login: Nov. 16, 2011
Birth Date: Dec. 12, 1979

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1 jermccloud 1 year, 6 months ago Context

This is a rewrite from another story I did up here, I just put more thought and time into it and like this version better. If I could delete the other story I would.

I have a pretty good idea of the plot and how the story ends if anyone is interested I'll share some of the ideas I have, but it's fine with me to keep the story open and see where it goes.


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1 jermccloud 1 year, 10 months ago Context

Thanks for the comment Regz and I agree, now that I read it again, it does seem to get escalated too quickly.


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1 jermccloud 5 years ago Context

Well, I tried doing the next chapter, but it wasn't quite right. I tried doing a little research and stuff on the net but, I don't think I really know enough about how investigations and stuff works. So anyone feel free to start a new branch if you feel that the new chapter doesn't fit. Thanks for the comments!


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1 jermccloud 5 years ago Context

thanks! yes, it takes place in an asylum.


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1 jermccloud 5 years ago Context

About the forums, I don't know if you can do it, but I came across Orca, see link here: http://www.boonex.com/products/orca/
I here the forum is free and powerful and says you can integrate your existing database of users to the forum. Might be worth looking into if your server supports it.


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1 jermccloud 5 years ago Context

I don't know but I'm having fun with this story. I've wrote page 7. Hope I'm not making things too complicated because I have no idea what's going to happen next.


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1 jermccloud 5 years ago Context

Good work! Loved it! I already added to your chapter, hope it works out.


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1 jermccloud 5 years ago Context

This is great! I love the idea of the drug having side affects!


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1 jermccloud 5 years ago Context

thanks


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1 jermccloud 5 years, 3 months ago Context

Thanks guys!


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