jermccloud |
Real Name: Jeremy McCloud
Date Joined: Jan. 14, 2008 Last Login: Nov. 16, 2011 Birth Date: Dec. 12, 1979 |
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jermccloud 1 year, 6 months ago
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This is a rewrite from another story I did up here, I just put more thought and time into it and like this version better. If I could delete the other story I would. I have a pretty good idea of the plot and how the story ends if anyone is interested I'll share some of the ideas I have, but it's fine with me to keep the story open and see where it goes. |
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jermccloud 1 year, 10 months ago
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Thanks for the comment Regz and I agree, now that I read it again, it does seem to get escalated too quickly. |
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jermccloud 5 years ago
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Well, I tried doing the next chapter, but it wasn't quite right. I tried doing a little research and stuff on the net but, I don't think I really know enough about how investigations and stuff works. So anyone feel free to start a new branch if you feel that the new chapter doesn't fit. Thanks for the comments! |
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jermccloud 5 years ago
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thanks! yes, it takes place in an asylum. |
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jermccloud 5 years ago
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About the forums, I don't know if you can do it, but I came across Orca, see link here: http://www.boonex.com/products/orca/ |
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jermccloud 5 years ago
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I don't know but I'm having fun with this story. I've wrote page 7. Hope I'm not making things too complicated because I have no idea what's going to happen next. |
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jermccloud 5 years ago
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Good work! Loved it! I already added to your chapter, hope it works out. |
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jermccloud 5 years ago
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This is great! I love the idea of the drug having side affects! |
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jermccloud 5 years ago
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thanks |
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jermccloud 5 years, 3 months ago
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Thanks guys! |
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34 Chapters by jermccloud
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2.9/5.0 - published Nov 16, 2011 - 1 comment (preview)
Awaking from a dreamlike state, Scott finds himself running, but doesn't remember who he is or where he's running to or from. He begins his journey into this strange and mysterious world in hopes of finding out who he is.
Tags: abandoned, bird, blood, city, clouds, identity, machine, memory, pandoras-box, rain, running, storm, tatoo |
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 16, 2011 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Scott asks the mother for help. She greets him into her home and he discovers why things are so different than what he remembers. She tells him the story of The Great War and an Organization called New Hope, that left a big mark in history.
Tags: hope, logo, organization, pandoras-box, peice, war |
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 16, 2011 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2011 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.1/5.0 - published Jul 13, 2011 - 2 comments (preview)
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3.2/5.0 - published Jan 04, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)
David is contacted by an old friend, Richard, that he hasn't seen for years. Richard's line of work is classified. Coming across important classified information, he reveals to David that he isn't like other people and that his life may be in dang
Tags: classified, mystery, old-friends, sci-fi, suspense, top-secret |
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2.9/5.0 - published Jun 04, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Ugo comes to a most unusual town where the rules are different. He tries to help an old man but soon finds himself in violation of the town's rules.
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3.0/5.0 - published May 24, 2008 - no comments (preview)
Harold becomes lifeless when he learns that a very close friend passed away, but comes back to reality after shocking news is revealed by a mutual friend.
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2.9/5.0 - published May 22, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Ugo arrives in a small town, thinking back to the day he left, that he decided to begin this journey of his.
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3.9/5.0 - published May 18, 2008 - no comments (preview)
Ugo had always felt that there was something missing, something he needed to do to make his life complete, but what? Ugo begins his journey in hopes off finding that missing something in his life and travels the world searching for it.
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2.9/5.0 - published May 16, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Emery is brought in to investigate these unexplained deaths.
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2.9/5.0 - published May 14, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Steve regains consciousness and finds that he's been drugged and has a temporary lose of memory, only be played in part by the Commander's game and madness.
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3.4/5.0 - published May 13, 2008 - 1 comment (preview)
Francis is old, tired of life. Having no friends or family left to turn to he decides to end his life, only to find that perhaps there are still somethings worth living for after all.
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4.1/5.0 - published May 13, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Quan awakes to find himself with an old seer. His views into the future are blocked by an unknown darkness. He gives Quan a few words of wisdom and a task to undergo before he vanishes into the night.
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3.1/5.0 - published May 13, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)
Locked in some kind of solitary confinement, Andrew's mind slowly begins to crack, trying desperately not to forget his past.
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2.9/5.0 - published May 07, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Morgan is visited by a voice in a time of crisis, only to tell him that he is the last one of his kind and that his body is designed to survive.
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2.9/5.0 - published May 07, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Jimmy took what evidence he had to the police but they had not taken him seriously. Now Jimmy takes things into his own hands and begins to start his own investagation.
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3.1/5.0 - published May 07, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
Meanwhile, we find that Quan, one of the other's that have a type of immunity to the drug, has been captured for unknown reasons and plans his escape.
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3.1/5.0 - published May 06, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
Jack, Henry and Donna manage to escape the Orbs. Henry reveals another one of his gadgets that may change Jack's life forever.
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3.4/5.0 - published May 05, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
Jack and Henry decide to go back to the site where Henry had first found the mirror, but before doing so decide to find the others before continuing their journey.
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3.4/5.0 - published May 03, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
Jack goes to the secret meeting, only to find that most of the members were not there, only Henry, whom is frantic and scared, and reveals to Jack, that Re-Education, may not be the only thing going on.
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3.4/5.0 - published May 02, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
Everyone has come to "The Meeting" only to be conditioned into mindless souls that are trained to kill and obey, all except Jack and a few others that aren't affected by "the drug".
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1.0/5.0 - published Apr 27, 2008 - no comments (preview)
While thinking he had performed a good deed, Quan was really lead into a trap, The man that captured him, believes Quan to be the man with the hearts of many, the one that is said to be the cause of the man's fallen city as read from an old prophecy
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-- /5.0 - created on Apr 27, 2008 - no comments (preview)
While thinking he had performed a good deed, Quan was really lead into a trap. The man that captured him, believes Quan to be the cause of the man's fallen city as read from an old prophecy.
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 31, 2008 - 3 comments
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3.1/5.0 - published Mar 03, 2008 - 1 comment
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3.5/5.0 - published Jan 29, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
The real reason for Henry's despair is revealed.
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3.8/5.0 - published Jan 22, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
Marcus has lost his identity, just after he finds himself at the scene of a crime, hands covered in blood.
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3.5/5.0 - published Jan 18, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.1/5.0 - published Jan 18, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.3/5.0 - published Jan 16, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)
Brendon searches to find the truth about what is happening to the people around him. Finding someone to give him the information he looks for, Brendons entire life changes and nothing is what it seems
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3.5/5.0 - published Jan 16, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
With the ability to see into the future, Philip has reoccuring visions of this girl being murdered and trys to find away to save her as well as learn about the origin of his abilites and develope new ones.
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3.6/5.0 - published Jan 16, 2008 - no comments (preview)
Henry is given a second chance at life to find something beautiful in the world that's worth living for.
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3.0/5.0 - published Jan 16, 2008 - no comments (preview)
The development of a young child into adult hood, opening up to the world and finding out who he really is.
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