Discussion of "Enigmatyic Mystery - Awakening" by jakestar

Wow! I don't think I can match that. I have no idea where I am going to go with my chapter now. I have a lot of thinking to do if I want to even be half as good as that. I loved the ending. Great writing.

Thanks Mcrum you're so nice in your comments but stop being so hard on yourself, I love your writing and think you are more than up to the task of tag teaming this story with me! :)

Will I ever make the featured story?

Damn.. a typo in the title... I hate that we can't alter or even delete published stories. Its my only annoyance with this site.

Reminds me of Clive Barker and King. That's a good thing.