jakestar |
Date Joined: Feb. 4, 2008
Last Login: May 30, 2011 |
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242 Comments by jakestar
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jakestar 8 months, 2 weeks ago
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Beautifully written. 5 stars. |
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jakestar 8 months, 2 weeks ago
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Thanks. |
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jakestar 8 months, 2 weeks ago
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Wow, beautifully written. I absolutely love your word usage. 5 stars. |
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jakestar 8 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ama...(wait for it)... zing |
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jakestar 3 years, 2 months ago
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Agreed. Thanks for the feedback. |
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jakestar 3 years, 2 months ago
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Hal was working undercover to bring down Dark Matter Space Co. He planted the Z virus so he could pin the outbreak on the doc and use it as a cover story for the ships destruction. The idea I failed to portray was one of warring intergalactic government factions who operate in secrecy. Hal is basicly a government issued Cleaner. I wanted to make is challenging to understand so people would really have to think about it, unfortunately I over did it. Sorry folks. |
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jakestar 3 years, 2 months ago
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Dang, sorry you didn't enjoy that. I chose to use Hal's waking from sleep as sufficient time progression. The fact that it didn't translate means I need to work on it, thanks bud. |
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jakestar 3 years, 2 months ago
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Beautiful. Nice work |
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jakestar 3 years, 2 months ago
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Based on how much I enjoyed reading this, I gave you a 5. Nice work lady. |
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jakestar 3 years, 2 months ago
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Thank you, never thought anyone would read this. |
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44 Chapters by jakestar
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3.2/5.0 - published May 25, 2011 - 2 comments (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Nov 26, 2008 - 8 comments (preview)
Zombies in space? How the hell is JakeStar going to pull that off? Read and discover.
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3.7/5.0 - published Nov 20, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
Beware, the following story is both heavy worded and cheesy. You've been warned.
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2.9/5.0 - published Nov 08, 2008 - no comments (preview)
James Cole a hobo at first glance, a true friend at a second. This is a true story, enjoy.
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4.1/5.0 - published Sep 11, 2008 - 11 comments
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3.7/5.0 - published Sep 04, 2008 - 8 comments
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4.0/5.0 - published Sep 02, 2008 - 14 comments
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 01, 2008 - 17 comments (preview)
Read carefully and pay attention or you might be confused.
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3.5/5.0 - published Aug 27, 2008 - 10 comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Aug 26, 2008 - no comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Aug 11, 2008 - 1 comment
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4.4/5.0 - published Aug 11, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Aug 11, 2008 - 7 comments
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3.8/5.0 - published Jul 30, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Jul 30, 2008 - 9 comments (preview)
If you like this story please read this series from the start. Starting with Enigmatic Mystery.
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3.8/5.0 - published Jul 21, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
Jim Harris learns about his past, find out more and maybe continue if you like.
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3.4/5.0 - published Jul 16, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
A new development in this ongoing mystery. Find out more about the women in the red car and maybe add your own two cents...
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-- /5.0 - created on Jul 12, 2008 - no comments
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4.5/5.0 - published Jul 11, 2008 - 11 comments
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 11, 2008 - 1 comment
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 11, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Jul 09, 2008 - 9 comments
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3.8/5.0 - published Jul 09, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Jul 08, 2008 - 10 comments
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 06, 2008 - 2 comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Jul 03, 2008 - no comments
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3.3/5.0 - published Jun 28, 2008 - 3 comments
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3.1/5.0 - published Jun 23, 2008 - 10 comments
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3.5/5.0 - published Jun 22, 2008 - 4 comments
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3.1/5.0 - published Jun 21, 2008 - no comments
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3.8/5.0 - published Jul 06, 2008 - 7 comments
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-- /5.0 - created on Jun 18, 2008 - no comments
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3.3/5.0 - published Jun 18, 2008 - 7 comments
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2.0/5.0 - published Jun 17, 2008 - 25 comments
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2.7/5.0 - published Jun 16, 2008 - 6 comments
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3.3/5.0 - published Jun 14, 2008 - 4 comments
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3.9/5.0 - published Jun 14, 2008 - 6 comments
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