Discussion of "In The Shroud of Shadow" by imadj

I really like it, I'm glad you named him. Thats one of the reasons I left it out, its different, not expected. The intoduction of the woman was unexpected as well and quite enjoyable. You've spurred my imagination to wonder what will happen next.
Where will she take him? Who is she, and who is he for that matter? How did she get him to appear in another time?

thanks for continuing it.
~X~

Oh, you are so sweet for writing to me! I am brand new here, read your story, loved it, and just sort of started typing. I was on auto pilot because you left me with such vivid imagery...don't know why I made it daylight suddenly. I guess I just felt like something "other" should happen and didn't want to change the place because you described it so well. Thanks again for writing. I feel better hearing from you. Write the next chapter!

Wow! all I have to say is you both can write. great transitions its like you share a brain. way to go!

Very good continuation!!

Thank you for saying so! I think the beginning of the story was so vivid in my mind, it just kind of took off.

Terrific chapter 2!