Discussion of "Jezzie's Quest" by imadj

well done. I enjoyed that.
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The only thing I didn't understand was the bit right at the to ??

I could see it. i just coldn't see where it was going. or what her quest was or is going to be.

That was the idea...I just started writing to set up a character in a situation and see if anyone would take up the reins and continue it. This wasn't anything I really thought about...I just typed it out cold...oh, and that bit right at the top is an actual lyric from an ancient celtic ballad called "Willie of Winsbury" which was actually going through my head at the time!

Imadj, you have got skillz...maybe even to pay the billz

Thanks cabustanoby! And I love chapter 4....nicely done. Left a comment for you there.

Great job! You are a great writer. Just the writing alone made me want to keep reading, and I thought your character is already very easy to relate to.

Thank you so much. I think this has th potential to become a good story. I am having fun!