Discussion of "'In the Shroud of Shadow part 4'" by imadj

well done imadj.
I like the addition of the spirit folk, great imagery. I am already getting ideas.
I really like this line for some reason, "Without knowing, he was certain the image came to him from the moon above. He trusted it at once and devoured it like a welcome drink."
I am glad you continued it, I am already writing the next chapter.
I actually love how you complement the stories as they unfold, each inception brings more ideas to me that I did not see before.
Again, its wonderful.
I hope you like my next one.
~X~

ok, I need the next chapter now. right now!!!

Please?

I am having so much fun with this! Every time you write something, Xylith, the ideas just sort of unfold. I don't even need to think about it, I just let your words sink in and then tart typing. I can't wait to see where you take it next!

Hey! I just saw this was the featured story on the home page! Very cool!

yeah! how cool is that. you deserve it though its a great chapter.
same here imadj, after I read what you contribute it just kinda flows out of me.

thanks ineedabath, love the name btw. thanks for the other posts too. I will put up the next chapter as soon as I can.

Cheers!

Best I've seen on here so far

Thanks for the positive feedback! I can't wait to see where this goes next!

I want to contribute to this, but the problem is, this is like trying to jump in to a good game of jump rope and not mess it up for everyone. Can you give me an idea of how long it takes you to produce a new chapter

I know you did not ask me this cabustanoby, and forgive me for answering Imadj, I just felt like answering.
honestly I write a chapter and then Imadj writes one shortly after mine, and then I read it and am inspired. Usually from 1 to 2 days(and depending on my day) to brainstorm it on paper for me and then I type it out and something new comes out of it. I have already written the next chapter on paper but have yet to type it out and post it, I probably will tomarrow afternoon, hopefully it is good.
again sorry for answering Imadj.
~X~

That's quite all right that you answered, Xylith. And, I must admit, your answer is much better than mine. Although I know I should, I don't write any drafts on this sight, I read your chapter, think about it for a while, and form some basic ideas. then I just start typing and get it out. The process usually is fairly quick for me, but as the story gets going, I find I out more initial thought into it. I think I'd better start doing drafts! See, you've inspired me to work harder!

very well constructed and an excellent spritual twist.

well written but kind typical