Discussion of "Two Steps Back" by imadj

I like it. It's a nice start and pulls the reader in. I'd like to add to it, but can't see where to take it at the moment.

Wow! Explosive intro! I can't wait to read chapter two, but I wanted to comment first. I really felt like I was there, watching her react like that; seeing her memory! Very descriptive.
The only thing I would change is don't start with the "..." Just start with "Now I want you to go back". Grammer type stuff!

Excellent! Really liked the end, which blew it wide open for mashing. Very good description of hypnosis -- points for good research.

Well written and keeps interest perfectly.

this was awesome... it immediately started turning wheels in my head... I may come back to try my hand in a few days, once I clear my plate a little...

This is very, very good. I'm off to read chapter 2.