Discussion of "The Call- Chapter 4" by imadj

Interesting! I'm about 3/4s of the way through a Chapter 4 myself -- don't know if I should save it or post it as a off-shoot. I had a completely different take. A bit more "Twilight Zone" :) But I like this, and the dialogue is fantastic. I have a good "reason" why some weren't whisked away to the white room, too, which I'll include in a Chapter Five. I like the collaborative aspect, so I'll take a crack at it, but would be interested to see what comes of the branch story, as well!