Discussion of "Johnny Boy" by imadj

This had me hooked dude. Excellent work.

Thanks, dogdeity! I appreciate the feedback! Oh, and I am a dudette :)

apologies dudette. figured this out after reading your other chapters/comments.
enjoy all your work! especially the poem. would give it a 5 but its only draft. (?)

That's sweet. I did the poem as a draft because it is something special t me that I didn't want continued. Just wanted to share it.

Smartly written,Many idea's were in my head as reading this.I was caught from top to bottom,which means its good,lot of times i say good its not true,but this is good

Thank you so much, HuntsFamousWolf! And thanks also for making me so certain that this was a true compliment...those are the best kind! Very much appreciated.

nice.. very nicely written