Discussion of "Johnny Boy part 3" by imadj

Wonderfully written as expected! Love it.

"Alex, in my time there hasn't been a murder -- at least not a proven murder -- in over 28 years. The punishment for murder is worse than death. It's total eradication of the bloodline."

This is perfect. I took this bit and ran with it for Chapter 4...hope ya like it!

can't wait!

Very well written, I enjoyed it and will continue to read as it progresses.
It reminds me of a book I once read written by Robert Sawyer called Hominids. You would like it Imadj.
Its about a theoretical quantum physicist named Bonditt who just happens to be a homo neanderthalis from another spatial dimension. He gets warped to our world while conducting an experiment in quantum computing just as some scientists from our world are conducting the same experiment.
On his world murder is delt with harshly too. Those found guilty and any relitives that share more than half the accused genetic make-up are subjected to forced sterilization. You should check it out its a good read.

Xylith - that sounds like something I'd like. At the moment I have a pile of books I'm reading and a few others on deck...but this is going on my list!

This is really getting good. Wish i would have read it before. The only thing I wasn't crazy about was the point where the narrator addresses the reader. It kind of took me out of the moment. Minor thing, but I wouldn't feel honest not mentioning it. Otherwise, great work.