Discussion of "Two Steps Back chapter 4" by imadj

Good detail, when explaining the light! Definitely gave me a nice visual! I also like how you left it WIDE open! He recognizes her, but how? Made me jump on writing the next chapter!
I also liked how you had her have a lot of replies, but only three that relate to her. Maybe though she shouldn't have received them so quickly... Or even descreetly in her email vs. on the forum. Still good though, them mentioning the same light she remembers.
Keep up the great work!