Discussion of "Two Steps Back Chapter 2" by imadj

Nice continuation of the original. I like the direction it's taking and I'm curious to see how you handle the fact that these two people somehow came to the same forensic psychiatrist (or whatever he is). Well written with no technical errors to speak of.

The direction seems like it could be stretched too far if the writing is not near-perfect, but the idea is new and could prove very interesting. It didn't pull me in immediately, however.

Nice continuation and interesting direction your going.

Very good. You continued the second chapter with no loss of pace, direction or tension. Characters and dialogue are very believable and as they say, 'the plot thickens'...lol. Great job!