Discussion of "The Call Chapter 2" by imadj
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TomTen3001 3 years, 9 months ago
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Imadj! Loved this extension! Very close to where I would go. Surprising, too, that you'd pick Boston as a location. I live in Ohio, grew up here, but spent two years in Boston while my wife was in school. Had considered setting this there! Funny! I'll have to start thinking of Chapter 3 ... |
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imadj 3 years, 9 months ago
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I'm so glad you liked it. I always feel so presumptuous following a chapter that is so well-written! Can't wait to read your next installment. |
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TomTen3001 3 years, 9 months ago
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It's fermenting in my goofy little mind. My question is, where does that phone number connect too? Too afraid to make the call. :) |
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Cornelius 3 years, 5 months ago
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Nice continuation Imadji! Consistent pacing with the first chapter. Could have been a little longer and more brave, i can tell you have the chops for that. Watch that last sentence, it sounds like the dog is helping drive! That doesn't keep me from giving you a solid 4 for "great!" |
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