Discussion of "The Unicorn and The Gypsy" by icanziiravor
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theblackhand 5 years ago
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Interesting....read my "The Light, and the Darkness." Good work. |
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thamagnopen 5 years ago
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I like the way you wrote this story! |
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theblackhand 5 years ago
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Gunther chpt 6 has been posted.... |
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hebe6405 4 years, 7 months ago
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I liked the character setup of the unicorn. The remainder of the story was a little weak - it lacked description to set up a visual in my head. I'm not sure of the setting (forest/desert/just outside a village??) and I'm not sure what the girl looks like. The wity banter was not enough to hold my attention - I did like the banter. ...It's just lacking. |
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