Discussion of "Mormon Penance" by honeygloom
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dogdeity11 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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'Religion molds such good liars.' honeygloom…Extraordinary continuation! I’ve gone back and re-read ‘Dust Bowl’ again, and then again for good measure. I’ve even taken the time to look up the Guthrie album and the history behind the ‘black blizzards’ caused by the great depression. My absolute favorite words to read are the ones that make me stop and think…and even sometimes do research. |
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honeygloom 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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Eh... plot? Direction? Yeah, I always have trouble with that. That is something I envy you for. I guess you'll find out when I do:) |
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Cynthus 6 months, 1 week ago
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Honeygloom... ummm yes, I was reading this and was having flashbacks. LOL Yes, I grew up in a Mormon family in Utah. I gave you a five. I need to think more about this one... Would you like me to write something? |
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honeygloom 6 months, 1 week ago
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Absolutely! That's what this whole mess is for:) I'd love to see what someone else's take on growing up Mormon is. |
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Cynthus 6 months, 1 week ago
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OK! :-) I'll sleep on it. |
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Cynthus 6 months, 1 week ago
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Honeygloom... here is what I came up with . ;-) Cyn |
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boobiewalker 6 months ago
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This is Boobie's secretary relaying a message from him as he runs on his treadmill, "trying desperately to get his fat **** in shape": "Tell her she has style and rhythm. And this story is hot. Makes me want to touch MYSELF!" |
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honeygloom 6 months ago
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Thanks Mr. Walker. Um...Maybe you should just have your secretary touch you;) |
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boobiewalker 5 months, 4 weeks ago
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Boobie here...Do you mean other than having her change my diapers? After all...an artist cannot simply stop writing whenever nature happens to call... |
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honeygloom 5 months, 4 weeks ago
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Do whatever you want with her, she's your secretary... Just make sure you have something to blackmail her with so she doesn't tell human resources. |
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honeygloom 5 months, 4 weeks ago
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Do whatever you want with her, she's your secretary... Just make sure you have something to blackmail her with so she doesn't tell human resources. |
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boobiewalker 5 months, 4 weeks ago
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Honeygloom, you sex fiend. You should be my accomplice. |
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honeygloom 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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Mmmmm... sorry my ego will not allow me to maintain accomplice status for long. Eventually, I'd have to overthrow you;) |
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boobiewalker 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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Oooooooooooooooooooohwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! |
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omochii123 3 months, 3 weeks ago
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I like the choice of words and the way you've written it so smoothly. You were writing straight from your mind, it felt like. It's fun reading your stuff! |
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