Discussion of "Found?" by honeygloom

Wow, the voice is great here. I wasn't expecting such a detective-type twist, but I like it. Let me see what I can do.

I think this was genius. It opens the door for so many possibilities... bravo...

Honey - what a class act you must be...it's everywhere in your writing. This courageous journey you all have put together here, chapter for chapter tells volumes, actually about the quality of writing and creativity everyone involved exhibits..

It's mad, darlings. It's very **** good.

I hardly don't know where to start. I guess i still haven't learned the proper form here as far as voting and following all at once - each of the writers on this story...and it that exactly...a story of immense proportions.

i can recall reading the first chapter a few weeks ago when i'd first started to hang out here...i am now, more than amazed.

i just left a comment for psycho.. i mentioned that i am still learning the form here and that i realized i need to go back and vote for each individual chapter.

So i will, i must..

i have to be honest with you. i particulary find your abilities as close to a gift as i have ever seen - writing gifts.

I can't imagine though, just who you really are, so good a job you do becoming in-character on the dozens of pieces you've written.

i am proud though, to know what little i realy do about you through your writing. It is excellent.

So too, then, must you be all the way live...

By far one of the best i have come across.

You want to go on the web to Thuglit, read through several editions...you can start there at #19 actually. Ha. that's because brian murphy (me) has a story i loved writing up there and i will have another published there for the May 1st edition. Not so much a story as a memory - faction for real.

But read some of the short stories published at that rag, and then i want you to sit down and write something in the same tough voice you use in a lot of your stuff here - this last chapter of yours i've just finished reading is a representative sample of your abilities.

I would like to notify Big Daddy Thug, Todd, the editor at thuglit and warn him to be on the lookout for something from Honeygloom

talk to me, yeah?

Also, you are welcome to come join me at www.myspace.stillelegant.com (The band section)

if you have a MySpace page, then please hit me up...you can check out my lyrics there as well as listen to original music i have posted.

Yea?

Once again, terrific job!!

I give this a five - actually, so far, i have tossed fives out at all the chapters for this story which i have already read...

lata

brian