Discussion of "Snowflakes" by honeygloom

Now that what I'm talking about! Good research - gets a 5 from me.

Hey thanks! Writing must have been such a chore before the internet:)

i' am sorry for giving you **** to, I just wanted contructive critisim. I have read a good amount of your storys, tell you have a good appreciation for word vocabulary. I am writing about myself, but i like that everyone relates it as a character. I likes the name of this story, the idea of which you conveyed. as snowlakes as everyone being an indivdual?

Hey, thanks! I left comments on your "Once Was Happy Ch3" in response:)

ha yeaa thats my kind of story! i wish i had of seen that earlier so i couldve written off that one instead of the other. o well good job anyway

I liked your chapter, you took on the supposed villain and gave him some depth. Plus you really brought in some interesting questions and plot elements which the story had been missing up until that point.

ah well thx ;) im interested to see where people take it

Great job. Love the research you put into this. I tried to continue it, I only hope I'm taking it in the general direction you had in mind. Please let me know what you think. I missed one typo toward the end of my chapter. Too late to make the correction.

Hey there, I tried evening the odds a little bit...I pimped this site (and of course my chapters) to alot of people I know with a list of some of my other favorite chapters, this being one of them. I'm not sure exactly how many people I sent the links to signed up and voted, but if you look at the contest page, it looks a bit more like it did last week and some of the better chapters (at least in my opinion) have climbed back into the rankings... I really don't care if I win or lose, as long as it's a bit more fair. I think this chapter deserves to be right where it is in the rankings... Good luck, and may the best chapters win. BTW, hopefully a few of the people that I sent to this site will get over the reservations of publishing to the web and we'll have a few more people to add to the current monster mash...

Wow, thanks, man. I really appreciate the comment. I hope some of your friends do start writing soon. The more the merrier :)

somebody 1-star nailed this in the past hour... it dropped from a 4.9 with only one vote... I guess it is just going to be an on-going battle

Pretty pathetic that someone would do something like that. I mean, it's not like the prize is a lot of money or anything. This chapter deserved to win, and I've also read some others that should be up at the top but aren't. Too bad. This could be a really good site if they can get this kind of thing fixed. Wish I could vote twice, Honeygloom

It's cool, I think they're working on improvements. Thanks for your support, you guys rock!

I wish you well for this contest. You are truly a great writer. Thanks for all the wonderful comments you gave on my work. You get a 5 from me.....

Thanks! I've really enjoyed your Gunther series so far. I can't wait to read more. It's such a guilty pleasure;)

When time permits read my Johnny Lame-O chapters

yea. i really dont think there should even be money involved on a site like this until they can find a sure way to make it fair. i think it ruins it. how its going right now could turn it into a popularity contest, whoever gets the most votes wins. hell i could write a paragraph about my day and walk away with 300 lol. even what that one guy is doin for u isnt exactly right, but what are we gonna do? someone has to win i guess

Oh, I don't think Psychos' friends are voting for me. I hope not anyway. I wouldn't want that and I certainly didn't ask for it.

Nah, what I said was this, I pimped my links, with my chapters, plus a list of my favorite chapters that I have read, which included this one, but it also included 23 others, all by different authors... if you go read the homepage, that is actually encouraged... in fact. they tell you to send the links around to everyone you know to have them come vote TO WIN THE CONTEST... sooo... while it might seem unethical to you, it has actually brought balance back to things... and it's not like I'm in the lead, so it's not like it's cheating or giving me any type of advantage, but it has definitely brought back a few chapters that obviously got screwed...

thats what it looks like he said. i mean, it doesnt really matter, yours is good enough to win anyway. other ppl could be doin that as well, so as long as a good one made it..

it doesnt seem unethical. cool then i didnt no that. idc really im just sayin they need a new system. ill have my head back plz:)

i hope u dont mind, honey, if i take ur story a different way

Congrats, Honeygloom!!!! Your piece was worthy of the prize. I love where you took this one. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to working with you in the future. Again, Congrats.

Thanks BoltNut! And thanks to everyone who voted and commented:) You're all awesome and I love this site!

This was really great!

ok... That is great