Discussion of "Day Thirteen: Nothing to Do With Tomatoes" by honeygloom

Hey, just wanted to let you know I posted another chapter of the Trader Chronicle. Hope you enjoy it.

Looks like you and I have similar nails-on-chalkboard reflexes. When either of my dogs are licking themselves, I want to scratch my face off.

Nothing bothers me like that noise does. It makes my stomach flip.. yuck!

First, this addition was awesome. You've seamlessly transitioned slightly away from the focal point, and yet it is still there. To me anyway, you’ve really embraced the spirit of this exercise. And of course your writing is top notch. As always.
Second, I too am repulsed by not just dogs, but anyone who licks there own balls. Do you think anyone actually likes that noise? Is it some sort of fetish?

Very possibly a fetish. There seems to be a fetish for everything.. not that I know about those kinds of things.