Discussion of "Justice for Sweet Jenny" by honeygloom

Ok it's super short, I know. But I think I managed to give the plot a nudge forward. I hope my 'clue' makes sense:)

Give up this decadence write something holy

Very good read Honey. Yeah, it was short, but it was perfect, I don't think you needed any more than that. It was a good point to leave off. Who knows, I might try my hand in this. Maybe from the mother of the grocery boy's perspective, hmmm? LOL

Dark and disturbing, sticky and sweet..are presumable your words. i often wondered who you are? are you a girl with john lennon poster's on your wall, with a bookcase in the corner, are you a truck driver who snorts cocaine drives all night. are you a garbage man or women?. this is what i was hoping sweet jenny would be about, with a name like justice for sweet jenny. it was short but short is short nothing wrong with that. a poem is short but it can mean everything.. as i said to you in the past, i would like to see a chapter of work from your own life. ,most of my writing is as well fanatic. nut alot of it is real just context ed and names changed...

Short but sweet, honey! Excellent addition, guiding the plot and yep, I caught the "clue"..;o), very well placed and written, too!

Looks like HFW beat me to the next chapter. I'll take a look at it and either continue his or post a separate string to yours. It'll be a day or two, though...I've still got a house full of family...lol.

honeygloom rules!

very polished writing--sounds like horror--Honey, I've sent a message to the site (SM) about deleting and/or editing some postings I've made--but no one got back to me--is there no way to delete or edit postings on this site?

exciting date that led the J girl to a warehouse in NJ--Jenny needs to pick her boyfriends better

Here you travel to help daughter, good job I was looking for a good piece of fiction.

Been gone for a bit. Looks like you have, too. I am sure you are much missed. Come back soon?