Discussion of "October Chill: Door to Door Evangelist" by honeygloom

Wow... great start... I watched the whole thing unfold behind my eyes... a 5 of course...

Thanks! I tried to take as different a direction as I could:)

ok... I have laid this out to make sure that we are not constantly following the same author through this... it will go as follows... Eleven, if you want you can plug this into your graph...

Psycho1_77 (1)
dogdiety11 (2)
honeygloom (3)
Elevatormusic (4)
Shadowman (5)
Houlgrave (6)
Nashvillebecker (7)
Cheeseliker (8)

These are the author numbers... and the numbers of the start chapters...

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 (start)

7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6

3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2

5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4

6 5 4 3 2 1 8 7

2 1 8 7 6 5 4 3

4 3 2 1 8 7 6 5

8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 (end)

It took me awhile, but I have it laid out so that it is diverse in order and everyone has a start, an end, and a chapter in each story without constantly following the same person from beginning to end. This should satisfy the needs of everyone involved, I should think... One side note, if the start chapters are not all in place by this Thursday, you forfeit your slot to one of the alternates/subs so that we can stay on target for the 6 week timeframe... I figure 5 days for each chapter to be posted is ample time and since we are officially beginning tomorrow, Thursday is the first cut-off... second installment is due by the following Tuesday and so on... I need to be told if you are going to sub a chapter... That being said, happy writing...

You've definitely taken a different track than the others, thus far, and it's all good. I can't wait to read everyone's mash to see how they continue someone else's, very different approach...lol. Five points!

ok... Nash fixed this so it works out better... it will go as follows... Eleven, if you want you can plug this into your graph...

Psycho1_77 (1)
dogdiety11 (2)
honeygloom (3)
Elevatormusic (4)
Shadowman (5)
Houlgrave (6)
Nashvillebecker (7)
Cheeseliker (8)

These are the author numbers... and the numbers of the start chapters...

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
2 4 6 8 1 3 5 7
3 6 1 4 7 2 8 5
4 8 1 6 2 7 5 3
5 1 3 7 2 8 4 6
6 2 8 5 3 7 1 4
7 5 3 1 8 6 4 2
8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1

go to the graph thread by dogdiety11

very cool! wish I was following this one.
*****

"..where she waited with a meat fork." Love it!
I guess we both love bacon.
Great set up!

That was outstanding. "But Stuart, that’s the odd thing. It isn’t everybody. So why us?" -- this line was inspired, it sets the tone for the whole mash. Very well written and a real page turner, adding the old man at the end was brutally effective.

4...very good

Thanks. I really liked your story, it was really good. Although it took me like 10 years to read because my computer is stupid..
Anyways, thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it.

-Rachel

Awesome. You've started something mysterious and intriguing here.

This,again is a great mash. To start of the project with this was daring and you produced well!
Mr. Henderson,in the stall scene....Stuart thinking it was the Preacher...mindblowing.

Honeybloom ...

This was great. I gave you a five. :-)
Cyn