Discussion of "The Plague- 1" by honeygloom

Nice start, I might take a take a crack at one of the chapeters a bit later. I wanna see where people take it a bit first.

Thanks! I can't wait to see what you do:)

A well-written and arresting beginning. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!
In fact, I'm feeling moved to have a go at it myself.

The Black Parade is Dead.
xoxo Long Live My Chemical Romance xoxo
Unleash the Bats!

i liked it a lot, my only complaint would be b/c of the format its a bit hard to read, but thats really my only problem with story mash...

anyway good work, please check out "The Glimmer Man" and see what you think

I enjoyed this chapter as well, and had my comment all planned out, and then I read rolandsc's. that is exactly what i wanted to say, and perhaps I over format, but i read my stuff outloud and when reading from a page, its easier when there are spaces between.. but since that is my only complaint: it means nothing!