Discussion of "October Chill: Feasting From Afar (4)" by honeygloom

Oh, you didn't!?!
Love the dialogue - ladies, maggots,
and the action. Great, great leave!

You never fail to deliver. Great as always

HG…gave you 5 earlier but didn’t have time to comment. (the Pistons and Red Wings were playing!)
This is fantastic. My personal favorite so far in all the OC series. The language and the dialogue I thought were superb. Just a really well thought out and well crafted chapter. You actually do write suspense and action pretty damn well! And wow…way to follow a really crazy chapter from Wsells too! I loved where he took the story…perverting it beyond what anyone has done so far. Werewolves!!! Just beautiful. It was a challenging leave and I thought you handled it with honors.
My one and only selfish gripe is that it was just too short. I was left on the edge of my seat wanting more, more, MORE!

Hey thanks guys, I have to admit, I was a little intimidated by werewolves and generals. I'm glad you all liked it:)

Super job, HoneyG...good research on the weapons info and a great, great, leave..."Caroline?" Oh,YES!

Great job and a very nice leave. Good research and I thought you turned the tale nicely. The wound he received should add an element of urgency for whoever follows this one!

Thanks for making this even more difficult...lol... as I was reading, ideas were flowing like a Rocky Mountain stream during a thunderstorm... I think I can handle this pretty well... just hope I don't screw the next in line...heeheehee

Well, hope you feel that I did this justice with the next chapter... I thought it came together pretty well and I'm usually very harsh on my own work... I enjoyed writing that one though... lol...