I told you I would do it. I killed Memoir Blues of a Chaos God and the Boys From Company B. Check the Projects Page if you don’t believe me. And if you don't want to see more stories needlessly axed, I suggest you get them finished. It’s only six chapters... You chicken?

Very nice... in the future though, you need to sign up for the projects on the forum pages linked to them. I'll let you go this time, but next it's a spanking you naughty poet;)

Beautiful! I loved this, simple honesty at its best.

Brutal and very honest. I love how your character is defiant in her thoughts but not in her actions. Great job!

Absolutely enchanting! You've created a wonderful atmosphere and your protagonist has a great voice. Very nice work.

Fair enough, if Deveraux logs back in they can have a later chapter. Let the writing begin!
-Honey

You're so silly, I bet it's not as bad as you think;) I can read it for you off line if you want and we can work on what you don't like... email me if you want. I'll give you the weekend to think about it and if you're sure you don't want to post Cheese can be the alternate.

Nice Nash, I like that she's getting passed around though. It fits with the whole hoge-podge functionality of the CoC. They'll pass her around until they find her niche and let 'er roll. Nice work!

Yep, you got it;)

Nice;) I'm not sure why it was important to point out that Shooter is hetero... that part of the conversation seemed out of place. Otherwise, great addition!