Discussion of "The Bank Robbers- All for One" by hebe6405
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chloe 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Brilliant! especially loved the use of the DVD commentary and the description of the bank presidents house- gives a great sense of his character. Just Perfect in every way! Must read more of your work...you wouldn't consider continung it would you? :) |
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Cheeseliker 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Great stuff here, the plot thickens, and you leave plenty for whoever mashes this, which just might be myself. |
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hebe6405 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Yes, yes - do go for the mash. Chloe dared me, so now I dare you :) |
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Cheeseliker 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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I accepted your dare. |
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PEPPZ 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Builds up suspense well. Definitely leaves the reader wanting to see what happens next. |
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