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In a dark, and familiar place  by hatifabdali

    "Ahhhhhhhh" A man wakes up to screaming.  As he opens his eyes and sees the

ceiling, a scared feeling comes upon him as everything feels so familiar.  With a

sense of curiosity he gets up to look around.  Realizing he doesn't know where he

is, he goes to the door, at the corner of the room.  It's an old, wooden, brown door. 

He turns the nub to open the door and walks into a hallway covered with old partly

torn newspaper, which seems to have been used as wallpaper. He tries to read the

newspaper, which end up to have been printed on 1887. he doesn't know why this

year seems familiar but since he doesn't care he looks around to find another

door.  Not seeing anything he starts to walk further down the hall.


     "Follow me... Follow me..." He hears the voice of a woman faintly calling for

him.  Trying to look deeper into the dark hall he stepped into, he sees a very

unstable and fading light. He shouts as he thinks he seen someone with in the light.

"Is anyone there?" he asks. Hearing no reply he starts walking faster trying to

reach the light before it fades away. As he seems to get closer to the light, the

light seems to be getting faster and slowly he falls behind, as the light seems to be

getting further and further away from him.

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Date created: Aug. 27, 2010
Date published: Aug. 27, 2010
Comments: 2
Tags: creepy, dark, darkness, fading, familiar, hall, step, suspense, voices, women
Word Count: 359
Times Read: 455
Story Length: 2
Children Rank: 2.1/5.0 (6 votes)