kinda had a hard time readying it hahah, is really small n the way you formated the words made it hard to read ;] but is really good

another good one lol, i would say u should copy paste your poems in to Microsoft words, and fix some mistakes, some words are kinda spelled wrong ;] i do that all the time to i make a lot of mistakes when written cause i write as it comes to me and don't care how is spelled lol

your poems are really well written, this is the first one i read, i'll just go read the other once, so far from me 5 out 5 hahah

It was a really interesting to read this, but is well written!!

yeah i used to feel that before when i wrote it, and now im just writing them ;]

well i mean not everything i write i expect people to agree with it ;] but thanks for the rate, and we should start one lol, have you read my other poems, you might like them, i been posting 2 poems since the 14th, i written these a while ago to hahaha

thank you, hahah how do you make a brotherhood, lets do it anyways hahah

but you didnt rate lol xD jk

do you think you can actually make more of this, i mean i myself can, but i heard here people can add chapters for other can you actually write a chapter for this piece