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I FEEL YOUR PAIN  by gwizz4gotten

FROM WHAT I CAN REMEMBER. MY FATHER WAS EXHAUSTED AND MY MOTHER TRYED TO BE TENDER . DESPERATE ATTEMPS TO FLEE AND LEAVE MY LITTLE BROTHER BEHIND WERE MISUNDERSTOOD. THE CHANT OF MY PARENTS "IF YOU DONT TAKE YOUR BROTHER YOU CANT GO" TAUGHT ME TO FEEL TRUE BROTHERHOOD.  AS THE YEARS REVEALED PAIN AND SUFFERING . I BECAME LOST ,ALONE, AND WONDERING.  YOU WERE STILL THEIR CONCERNED AND KARING..FOR THAT I LOVE YOU THANK YOU.  PUNISHING EYES FROM ABOVE.. HAS BOTH OF US DESTROYED FROM LOVE. IF I COULD CHANNEL ALL YOUR WORST PAINS I WOULD MAKE THEM MINE . THERE NO REASON FOR BOTH OF US TO LOSE HOPE AND WAIT FOR THAT TIME.  CANT YOU SEE WITH YOUR SUCSESS THIS HOUSE WILL BE BLESSED.. LETS TAKE IT BACK AND PLAY HOMERUN.. ME AND YOU AGAINST EVERY ONE ELSE I KNOW THEIR MORE TO THIS LIFE WE CANT BE DONE .. LOVE YOU BROTHER IM GONE..

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Date created: Nov. 10, 2008
Date published: Nov. 10, 2008
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Word Count: 174
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