Discussion of "Speechless . . ."(draft) by griotmama

You write extremely well, but I found myself thinking, as I read; are there any sentences without multiple adjectives? By the third paragraph I was going, "blah, blah, blah".

Hey, I know that sounds terrible. It isn't meant to be. I'm painfully aware of creative writing courses that practically require such sentencing.

I loved the story line! I saw the video in your words. I was simply overwhelmed by adjectives...lol.