:D :D I am tossing around another chapter now, I just don't know what - or where I want to go with it! I will add on, but please don't wait for me- :D

That is my problem, it came to me one day and that's all I got. I don't know where to go with it, I was hoping some one would! I've got lots of starts with no middles, and only partial endings.

Thanks for the review, I've been playing with a second chapter, I'll post what I got maybe that'll be more mashable.

I really like this a lot! I'm just nervous about adding another chapter, I think I have an idea, but... I donno. Great work, and great description, especially in Wills facial expressions, and emotions.

Hey there all, I have never been good at these things, nor have I ever liked them. But I guess it's the polite thing to do.

Truth be told, I am more of a poet than a story writer and that really comes out in my lack of grammar and punctuation. Or over use of punctuation, which ever.

Ahem. Anyway, I've been stalking this site for a while and I really can't wait to start mashing up!