Discussion of "Befores and Afters" by foxpamela

You've got a way with words---really good. I don't know if this is something I'd like to continue--but I hope you do! :D

Thanks Kabrams.

Written well enough, I just don't find reading about child killers worthy. No offense.

Very vivid. You go girl.

Bravo. I haven't read all of the stories here, but I've read enough to see that you rank amongst the top.You're truly an easy and entertaining read.
And trust me,some of us actually read the 'baby' reference as the metaphoric painting it was, not literally.

Thanks Ramsey, on first glance I can see why people take that literally. Perhaps that expression is a rare colloquoialism. Nice use of first person, foxpamela, I don't think this would work as wel otherwise.

Quite good!!
please read in the shroud of shadow very interested in what you have to say about it.
~X~