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INTO THE DARKNESS  by filmgeek

Where am I? Who am I? Why are my eyes are covered with something. Some sort of cloth.My hands are bound. I am sitting on a wooden chair. The air feels thick and smells like cigarettes. My head hurts and I think I'm bleeding. I hear something footsteps above me. Dirt falls on my head from above."Hello" There is no answer. 

I hear more footsteps and a door opens and shuts. Souns of keys locking the door. The heavy sounding boots step on the floor,Keys jingle. The footsteps walk across from me. I hear water pouring into a cup. "who are you?" I ask. The water stops and  I hear someone take a drink. "Can I have some water? I am so thirsty." Glass crashes onto the floor. I hear water dripping. "Why are you doing this to me?" The walking walks past me again and the footsteps go back up and the door opens then closes again. I hear the door lock again. "HELLO!" I am so dizzy. Moments pass as I go in and out of conciousness. "ahhh" My head is pulled back my mouth forced open and water is poured in my mouth. It runs down my face as I choke on the water. I gag and spit some out. I pass out again.

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  'INTO THE DARKNESS' statistics: (click to read)
Date created: July 8, 2008
Date published: July 8, 2008
Comments: total 1
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Word Count: 237
Times Read: 77
Story Length: 3
Children Rank: 3.9/5.0 (2 votes)
Descendant Rank: 0.0/5.0 (4 votes)