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The Prison From Hell (Chapter1)  by fabo70

The Next Day Faden was Sleep in his room his Friend Marcus Called him on his Cell Phone Dude get up its the big day. man we are going on the Field to the **** Haunted Prison. man you don't want to miss out on this Ghoslty Experience Man i don't know if i am going. what the **** you mean you not going oh you going man come i did not waste  Hundred Dollar just so you can sit at home get your **** out of that and get dress. Oh yeah did i mention. Jessica was going She is yeah man this can be your Time to get it in. Sense you never even talk to her once yeah that was once. and you frozed up. i did not freeze she said hay to you and you stood there. with your mouth Wide open anyways get up Zane and Rico are going so just get your **** out that bed at school as everybody sits in the the Lunch room getting ready to go to the bus. Zane, Rico what's good Man nothing man i heard this Prison is haunted and alot of murders went on and it got to the point were they had to close the **** down Faden looks arcoss the room and looks at Jessica as she walks by she looks up at him and smiles and he quickly turns away. ok may i have you guys attention. we are going to get line up by and when 1,2,3 go to the left  that is bus one are bus two. alright dude we all on the same bus yeah faden Jessica is on the same bus as we are. go talk to her. As faden walks to Jessica and says hay she turns around and says hi i notice looking at me i was wondering when you are just going to come over here and talk to me. what took you so long anyway Say gives him a flirty looking smile. and stands there and Jessica what's up girl hay zeek. zeek looks at faden and laughes dude way to go man you freaking Choked again. dude how are you suppose to ask her to be your girlfriend when you afarid to take to the chick look. what keele shut up. damn man she diss you bad ok lets go get on the bus. look now is your chance go sit with her. alright i'm going to sit by her then i am going to ask does she has a boyfriend then ask her out go ahead hay Jessica hay can i sit down yeah sure. so are you ready to go into this Haunted  Prsison. yeah so what are you doing tonight for halloween Nothing Really why  because i was wondering if you wanted to.  Jessica what baby hay so is zeek your boyfriend No. he likes me thought i be right back. **** so dude how it go **** you want Vince.  man how did it go man i was about to ask her to come to the crib to watch a couple of scary movies you then i make my ask her out and then make my move on her. well you better do it Zeek is about to take her from you. better ask her out before he does. come man this dude plays basketball he sings. only thing i can do is. what i don't know. i haven't figure it out yet. a Hour past by after everybody got something to eat  they made there way to the haunted Prison. The Teacher Ms.Henderson was like Please stay together if you get lost i will not become looking for you. so get in a group and stay with it Vince come dude and come dude why you got that white boy over with us  he looks like that dude from everybody hates Chris. sup guys man i can't wait until i get in this place we going in this place vience shut the hell up. okThis Prison was build in 1956's this is where all the Serial Killers Rapist and stuff are at.alot of people tried to stay. but they could because o the things that happen around here so you sayng that this place is haunted Zeek replies yes indeed it is haunted there was a man nama Muggs sigels he  murder all his cellmates. it got to the point they had to kill him because he would go in cells killing people. now this unrestless spirts won't pass because of the horriable defeat they faced yeah right zeek says i don't beleive oh you don't dude how can i talk to her when he ask his arm around her and they all hunged up just go talk i did already well then ask her out are i will for you and you don't won't vince to  do that don't you. As the day pass everybody was walking around taking pictures  fabian sees Jessica in one of the cells hay. hay why are you in by yourself i just looking around.i can't believe they slept on this thing there hard as a **** rock.there something you want to ask me. i was just wondering  man why everything i see you you around her look i gotta go i talk to you later. check this **** out the eletric chair. Vince hop your punk **** on so i can fry you punk ****  man you get on the **** man lower your voice. what you three punk bitches doing anyway  man shut your mouth man i kick your **** white boy. Faden looks at jessica and she smiles the hell you looking Zeek come down ok where is everybody i don't know. man look this is all yourguys fault you faggots play to much man who you talking to like that son. guys lets go Jessica  where are suppose to go far away from those guys. i think faden likes me girl he's ugly but he nice sweet, kind smart and ugly come zeek has a six pack girl he a basketball player is he'll go pro but that faden no sorry. i can't see it you think so zeek is the one for you not him. you girls ready lets find away out of here. lets leave this **** alone. by theresevles that's really mean you actually going to let these dudes stay here by themsevlles **** yeah. yeah you punk **** niggas better come on. The Teacher Called row and put a check mark by everybody name. The buhes left man what the buses just pulled off are you serious keele says **** alright lets come down. lets find that man the tour guy what was his name i don't no who. but lets find him Zeek grabs jessica hand. so dude you going to watch these two hold all day. all day dude me might be in here all night and then that when all the ghost come out. whatever nigga lets go 

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Date created: Oct. 27, 2009
Date published: Oct. 27, 2009
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Tags: 1, chapter
Word Count: 1228
Times Read: 158
Story Length: 4
Children Rank: 3.4/5.0 (2 votes)
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