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"The Element of Love (PLOT)"

The Element of Love (Play) Chapter 1  by fabo70

 

Narrottor:The Story Takes Place in MIA.Florida. Where The Weather  the  woman look. Nice EveryBody Hustling,Partying Having a Good Time boy for One Kid It never Happens.This is a Stroy about a kid name. James who is a Senior in High School he never. Had a Girlfriend every Girl he liked Turned him down because they thought he was Ugly looking. But there one Girl That he has his Eyes on her name is Tami the most popular Girl In School. with the Help of his Two Friends Greg and Zack there going to make sure. that he gets the Girl He wants. It is the First Day of School. James Is still In the bed sleep The Radio Comes on he always listen to the Hip Hop Channel wake up Florida. He mom Bust in the room. telling him to get up

James's Mom:James Get your **** out that bed its time to go to school you should of took your **** to bed early last night. all up on myspace last night looking at girls you never gonna.Get Know breakfast is ready want to come down here and eat the **** before its gets Cold.

James:I'm Up I'm Up

James's Father:Boy you not up yet man your going to miss the bus

James:Dad i have my Driver's Liscenes why can't i just drive to school

Jame's Mom: I tell you why July 4, you were suppose to be in the house by Twelve O'Clock you came in at Twevle Fourty.

James:I Cam Fourty mins late so what

Jame's Father:Get Ready For School Son i don't want to here another Word coming out your mouth.

Narrottor:After Breakfast James sits and waits for the bus to come. he waits and he waits finally the bus comes he was the only one on the bus.

Jame's: Man where is everybody

Bus Driver:Everybody got Cars there driving it' time for you to do the samething bro your're never gonna get any Pussy riding the bus all the time. when i was your age i got my liscence when i was sixteen. man those were the best years of my Life I got so much Pussy it didn't make any sense man. so Jame this your senior year right.

James:Yeah

Bus Driver:Well if i was you i be trying to get me a car

James:I got what i need but i came home late

Bus Driver:You nevere want to do that when your parents say be house at 12:00 they mean 12:00 not 12:03 Not 12:36, They mean 12:00

James: I Know but traffic got bagged up really bad and i mean what am i suppose to do. knock the cars off the Road.

Bus Driver:Well here is your stop enjoy your first day of school and listen if there any female in that school that you want you can get her let this be your year.

Narrottor:As James walks,In Side the Building and sees alot of Old Faces that he seen. Last year. he tries to look for his friends Greg,Zack he sees looks over someone. and sees them talking to a bunch of Girls Soon as the girls leave he walks over to them.

James:Man when you guys start getting Pussy

Greg:Man sense we got Cars,Money now

Zack:Man what's up with you going to talk to any girls this year

James:Yeah i am

Zack:Dude you still not thinking about Tami are you

Greg:Man you haven't gotten with her then you not going to get with her now

James: I have to this has to be my year i only got one more try.

Zack:Look sense we getting Girls Now man we are going to school on on some Game.

Greg:Yeah Man First thing you got to do is she a cheerleader all the football players want her basketball Join one of those.

James:Did Football i got knock the **** Out.

Zack:Oh yeah they but you in a comma for three week Staright.

James:Anyways what do i have to do. oh man i have a class with her

Greg: Dude you are so in there all you have to do is hope she ask you for a pencil are something.

James:Whatever nigga

Narrottor:As James walks in the first then happen him and Tami man eye contact he quickly looks away. he sits down The captain of the Football Team Jerome and The Co Captain. Tyson comes walking in and sits by Tami flirtying and putting her Arm around her. Greg Comes walking in.

James:Man you got this Class To.

Greg:Yep

James:Man look at her man i never met a Girl so

Greg:Dude you said that **** in 9th Grade about Melissa 10th Grade and Hayden 11 now you trying to get with old year she won't give you the time of Day.

Jame:Dude i have to

Mr.Walker:Aint Nobody talking when i talking fella's so shut the **** up

Class Room:(Laughes)

Mr.Walker:Know late football tryouts are being Held today if you want to try out for football i guess you got to talk to the captain and the co Captain.

Jerome:Yeah Punk come and Join

Greg:who

Tyrell:Not You Him

Jerome:The Bitch in the white girl

James:Wait a **** minute

Mrs.Walker:Sit down mr.Thompson one more of those outbust you be out my Door you here me son.

James:Yeah.

Mrs.Walker:Yeah.

James:Yes Sir.

Narrottor:After the School Day was over Greg walks to his car telling James Different ways he can get Tami Attention. how he can get tami to fall for him. after he left he got back on the bus listen what Greg and zack were tellin him. at the Dinner Table James's Father ask him how was his first day of school as a senior.

James's Father: So how was your first day at schoo

James:It was alright. i'm thinking about taking up boxing

Jame's Mother Boxing why would you do some stupid **** like that

James:I don't no i just want to give something a try this is my senior year and i have to make this year my year. i am tried of living it as a outcast.

James's Mom: You are not a Outcast who told you that

James:Nobody

James's Father: Look Our soon never brought a girl home he never went on any dates. he wants to find himself he needs to go ahead.

James's Mom: He Doesn't need to bring any girls home he need's to stay focus on his Education.

James's Father:Baby a man need some lovely in his life you know how it was when i meet you how i won your heart.

James's Mom:Yes i remeber

Jame's Father:Baby he is trying to do the samething let him have his shine.

Narrottor:The Phone Ring James's Father Asnswer's it it was Greg to speak to James After James Father Talked his **** to Greg he gave the phone to James Saying don't be  tieing up the phone lines talking to your punk Friends.

Greg:What's up man

James:Nothing you know Tommrrow i am going to try out for boxing and i am going to run for Class President.

Greg:You do know Jerome is running for president right.

James:Yeah i know but i know for a fact i can beat him and i can finally win Tami's Heart.

Greg:Ok Good Luck.

James:See ya tommrrow Greg.

 Greg:Alright

 

 

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Date created: Nov. 3, 2009
Date published: Nov. 4, 2009
Comments: 0
Tags: 1, chapter
Word Count: 1393
Times Read: 136
Story Length: 9
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