Discussion of "To Attack in Haste" by ericswyatt

I am a sucker for anything midievil and or fantasy especially when it is as well written as this.

5 big fat stars.

Thanks so much Jakestar.

Hopefully the person I wrote this for will be as happy with it as you are!!! (I wrote this sample in an attempt to land a ghost-writing gig...)

OH, and a word of warning: Do NOT attempt to read this story aloud if you have a Cindy Brady-like lisp. UNLESS of course it has been assigned to you to read by your speech therapist. (There are a LOT of 's' words in this piece....yikes.

Ha, hey check out my story Battlefield Never, again. and tell me what you think.

You put me there. I could feel the heavy armor, stinging eyes, the tension before battle, and I enjoyed reading it.

Great character development of the Sergeant, and even peripherally of the Captain. This is a great set-up for a really good, difficult battle. I don’t have a lot to say since there isn’t much information given as far as the story line, but this is really well written and a great start for Mashing.