Discussion of "To Attack in Haste" by ericswyatt
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jakestar 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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I am a sucker for anything midievil and or fantasy especially when it is as well written as this. 5 big fat stars. |
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ericswyatt 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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Thanks so much Jakestar. Hopefully the person I wrote this for will be as happy with it as you are!!! (I wrote this sample in an attempt to land a ghost-writing gig...) |
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ericswyatt 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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OH, and a word of warning: Do NOT attempt to read this story aloud if you have a Cindy Brady-like lisp. UNLESS of course it has been assigned to you to read by your speech therapist. (There are a LOT of 's' words in this piece....yikes. |
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jakestar 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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Ha, hey check out my story Battlefield Never, again. and tell me what you think. |
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writerise 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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You put me there. I could feel the heavy armor, stinging eyes, the tension before battle, and I enjoyed reading it. |
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honeygloom 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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Great character development of the Sergeant, and even peripherally of the Captain. This is a great set-up for a really good, difficult battle. I don’t have a lot to say since there isn’t much information given as far as the story line, but this is really well written and a great start for Mashing. |
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