Discussion of "A Woman Scorned II" by dresdendoll

Nice. I was thinking along the same lines to continue it, but you did better than I.

Thank you !!!

I'm glad you liked it! The beginning was so good that I hope I did it justice...Have any ideas for what comes next?

Oh yes ! Already writing it now! Of course, you may have already read the next part, making this comment a bit redundant, but oh well. BTW...I've included the submission by Ronnie Williamson as well, so that is why I have called it part 4.

I'm behind the power curve...stories advanced past my reading this chapter, but...really great job, dresdendoll. Now, to catch up...lol

So, I couldn't help myself...er, stop myself...lol. I added a rather bizarre twist to this tale. If anyone asks, I'll finish it. Please ask, please, please....lol.

I am asking.....please, continue.

This is so diabolical. I'm literally laughing while I read this...

As far as style goes, for some reason I keep picturing Uma Thurman in Kill Bill...it has that kind of URGENCY, as the story has quickly turned into the chase. Good stuff.

Very nicely done!

" Girls who looked like they were being strangled by their thick, woolen scarves would get up and talk in monotones about the oppression of women."

love your desciptions. terrific mash!

Great chapter! You managed to bring a whole new dimension to the character. I already get the feeling that she was the wrong woman to cross...