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theburning rage  by dr3arms

One punch after another knocks him down, yet he still stands up. “Heh… That all ya got?” Another volley of hits to the head sends him flying another few feet into the air. Yet he still stood up as though nothing happened. “Seriosly, you think you can just knock me down with those piss ant hits of yours? I'm immotrtal, I am a god here, and if you think you can make me fall down and not get back up... then you got another thing coming!”

The attackers kept hitting him over and over again for the next hour, the attackee laughing insanely as the blows landed one after another. Bones cracked and shattered, still he laughed it off. Organs were bruised, still he laughed. cuts bled profusly and fingers broken off. Still he laughed through the pain. The attackers seemingly scared off by this fact unloaded everything they had into him.

“HA! ANYTHING YOU SAY OR DO IS SO **** USELESS AGAINST ME! I WILL LIVE ON YOU ****! I WIL LIVE!!!” with that the broken man stood up to his full height, he never imagined he would enjoy it this much, the sensation of truly living. Of truly fighting for ones love and life and thoughts. To fight for his own right to talk the talk and defend it as well.  He dusted himself off in a orderly fashion and grinned. Though three of his teeth were missing. He could still grin. “What do you want? Money? Power? Respect? You pitiful **** have lost everything the moment you messed with me!” He ran at them grabbing a pole with a sharpened point at one end and ran faster still and then jumped into the air and landing behind the first attacker, still smiling and bleeding.

“Oops… Forgot something. Heh…” the sharpened  pole found its mark as it plunged through the back of the skull and down the attackers spine and dug itself in the ground a few inches. “Oh… never mind. Now for the REST OF YOU HA!!!”  He grabbed the pole still inside the first guy and yanked hard as it ripped him nearly in two, the blood showering  onto the ground in a nice little puddle.

He ran again towards the other two and side stepped to the right, and thrust harder then the first time and the pole shunted its way through the pairs lungs and heart then yanked again downward to make a clean slice through the abdomen, thighs, knees, and feet before walking away as if nothing had happened in the first place, leaving behind a bloody and horrific sight to behold.

****.”

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Date created: April 26, 2009
Date published: April 26, 2009
Comments: 0
Tags: actions, blood, burning, dramatic, fiction, fun, gore, heart, horror, lungs, pole, rage, series, sharp, sharpened, short, the
Word Count: 567
Times Read: 75
Story Length: 1