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-1 dr3arms 1 month ago Context

To each their own. Really dude, stop replying. Short stories? are you effin kidding me? damn guy, you really need to check out some other peoples works, there are longer than mine! lmao, i dont post here for others approval on how i use this site, if people read, they read, is not, then whatever.


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-1 dr3arms 1 month, 4 weeks ago Context

Then let ME amend my comment: If you don't like my stuff, don't read it. Further more, don't comment on it that you don't want to read it.

Because that means you read it, which means you like it. Therefor, you're addicted to making contradictory actions judging by this conversation alone.


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-1 dr3arms 2 months ago Context

Lol. Wow, actually, I didn't. I just posted it to post it, I asked the guy who spam mailed it to me for permission, and he said sure thing.


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1 dr3arms 2 months ago Context

I think the big CL has just up and went poof.


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1 dr3arms 2 months ago Context

Dear god why!?


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1 dr3arms 3 months, 1 week ago Context

YES! VERY EPIC!
http://www.okcupid.com/forum?tid=5191102523356332182

heres the link to my resume of works on okcupid.com.


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1 dr3arms 4 months, 1 week ago Context

Okay, it'll be a while before I get around to it though, I'm going through and editing my old stuff like crazy, I've got all of the one shots edited and posted, and it has something crazy like 715 reads. Well, crazy to me at least.


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2 dr3arms 4 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Thank you!


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3 dr3arms 4 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Never mind about the project, I couldn't even bring myself to post the first part. for me, posting that hideous, repugnant part me my life, where all I did was attack people for no reason... I-I want to bury this, and never touch it again.


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2 dr3arms 4 months, 3 weeks ago Context

a few others that helped in calming things down are aggloi, ace, and anyone else.


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2 dr3arms 4 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Also, to JD, dude. My god my man, thank you for putting me in my place back then. You're right, you've always been right. If this were face to face instead of online, I would've acted much differently than I did here. I've always been uncomfortable in groups, and tended to think of myself as the low man on the totem pole.

Upon further reflection, and rereading this thread, I do come across as being a person who didn't understand what he was doing to all of the hard work he had previously built up. While all the others simply goaded me on in one way or another, you, Katrina, and a few others I don't remember calmed things down right quick.

thank you!


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2 dr3arms 4 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Also, I want to apologize to Cheeseliker for the jackass comments I made out of anger, when all you guys were doing was trying to show me the ropes and calm me down.

I haven't changed anything you guys and gals have said, just gotten rid of the votes and the time stamps. Kind of annoying to do in word, but, that's life.


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-2 dr3arms 4 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Hey all, Morgan, AKA Dr3arms here, anyways, I'm on Wattpad.com now, and I'm doing a new Ebook on the Fearsome Foursomes little dramatic escapade here on Storymash. (nothing biographical or anything like that, just posts, comments, and threads) And I wanted to be as thorough as possible in the order of the events when they happened.

Anyways, I wanted to do a proper step first and ask your permission to use your site handles. If not, I'll just change a few letters of your handle to save face and call it a day. Anyways, by the time any of ya'll read this, I'll probably have put it up anyways.

Let me know at enigmatt2002@yahoo.com.

Love ya'll like a basketball!


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1 dr3arms 4 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Hey all, Morgan, AKA Dr3arms here, anyways, I'm on Wattpad.com now, and I'm doing a new Ebook on the Fearsome Foursomes little dramatic escapade here on Storymash. (nothing biographical or anything like that, just posts, comments, and threads) And I wanted to be as thorough as possible in the order of the events when they happened.

Anyways, I wanted to do a proper step first and ask your permission to use your site handles. If not, I'll just change a few letters of your handle to save face and call it a day. Anyways, by the time any of ya'll read this, I'll probably have put it up anyways.

Let me know at enigmatt2002@yahoo.com.

Love ya'll like a basketball!


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1 dr3arms 5 months, 1 week ago Context

Hello all! veteran member here. quick question.

I've been working on the same project for a number of years now and lately I've run into problems on how to keep the spark of interest going in writing it.

I solved this by having one of the MCs switching sides, as well as the usual side dish of all hell breaking loose and what not. But now I'm in new territory, and I don't know how to go about this.

The main premise of the project being that the MC is drawn into a war between Existence and Nonexistence, characterized by a door and a chasm to the respective terms.

With so many sup plots to keep track of, numerous story lines, and constantly changing backdrops, I'm constantly vexed as to how to wrap up the seventh chapter while at the same time, keeping things fresh.

Any ideas? email me at enigmatt2002@yahoo.com


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 1 month ago Context

And I'm kicking **** and taking a long time to get three names! MUA HA HA HA! Anyways, just posted my first entry in a while, so take a look at it please! Feedback is awesome!


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 6 months ago Context

thank you!


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 6 months ago Context

http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1450073727/sr=8-1/qid=1281313792/ref=olp_product_details?ie=UTF8&me&qid=1281313792&sr=8-1&seller


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 10 months ago Context

still, I'd much prefer the tree config, its easier for me to see what chapter I'm on, oh well, I'll have to redo the series anyways, so it'll be worth the trouble.


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 10 months ago Context

yeah, its kinda annoying... instead of a tree like config, its just a straight shot down.


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 11 months ago Context

sorry for the delayed reply, take a look here:

http://storymash.com/u/delmer/kagehogi/


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 11 months ago Context

the important thing:

wtf is up with the tree graph?


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 11 months ago Context

http://storymash.com/u/dr3arms/gepohare/

Almost **** done with the sixth chapter! I'm **** psyched! Let me know what you think!


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 11 months ago Context

i figured the whole thing out!


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

very cool


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

So... Only 3k are active on this site? Wow... So this place really is a small town. Interesting.


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

OK.


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

I was just wondering, because it seems like a small town kinda thing with the lack of activity going on in the forums. I'm not bashing anything, I'm just curious, thats all.


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

My favorite way is to drink coffee or five hour power (ONE A DAY) and just let the ideas fly out as I write.


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

Lol, I like the snub at the end!


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

Interesting, has a bit of potential, and I'd really like to see how you keep this one up!


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

just posted "the death of barney fife, robot king"
http://storymash.com/u/dr3arms/sabinavo/

let me know what you think?


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

Thank you! Well, I've really been improving over all. I've been posting new parts every couple of days on story mash. since I'm trying to wrap up the sixth chapter in order to get started on the seventh and what not. I'll copy paste what I've got down thus far from a word pad excerpt I worked on previously.

1. Sho (2 to 3 letters)

two letters:

1. Mu
2. Nu
3. Xi
4. Pi

three letters
1. Eta
2. Rho
3. Tau
4. Phi
5. Chi
6. Psi
7. San

2. Heta (4 to 5 letters)

four letters:
1. Beta
2. Zeta
3. Iota

five letters:
1. Alpha
2. Gamma
3. Delta
4. Kappa
5. Theta
6. Sigma
7. Omega
8. Qoppa
9. Sampi

3. Stigma (6 to 7 letters)

six letter:

1. Lambda

seven letter:

1. Epsilon
2. Omicron
3. Digamma

Originally I was thinking that I'd go by how the letters were shown on Wikipedia, with the known letters being the lowest class, then the unused ones being a rank above those like a military, and final the other class letters being at the top.

Then I decided to see how many of each letter number there were. As per the place in the story where they are.... How best to put it..

In the sixth chapter, a fight breaks out between the Skeletal Angels and Twilight, a fusion of sorts who basically flambes everyone. When the chaos is over and done with, Twilight dies and separates into Alpha and Omega, who are in fact two of the thirty one Fragments of the Creation's Vortex, a tool that can undo the damage the Golden Strands have done.

So Morgan (in the story) has decided to send them off to gather the other fragments like them selves. I've already got that part down pat, its how I want to potray the other fragments thats frustrating.

I've come up with a few options on how to do this:

1. The fragments with 2 to 3 letters (Xi, Mu, Nu, Pi, Sho, Tau) be the stronger and the fragments with longer names be weaker based on the number of letters that make up their names.

2. Throw the fragments with the same first letter in the names together, almost like family ties and what not, and see where that leads.

3. Put a even number of each class of fragment into three factions and let them go at it. This and number 2 would be an interesting choice, but take the most time to get the ball rolling to the good part.

4. Have it be almost like a food chain kinda thing, where it wouldn't matter mow many characters are in the name, that if the stronger gets defeated by the weaker, then the winner gets the strength of the loser plus that of their defeated opponents.

There are just so many avenues I could go with this that it almost feels a little bit over whelming to me. It would really help if I could collaborate with some one on this, this way we could bounce ideas off of each other. The fragments themselves are sentient, but I haven't gotten beyond that point.

The book itself is going to be ten chapters long, and with nearly 6/10 of it completed, it only gives me four more chapters to get everything in order. I might add another ten chapters onto it, but my heads been buzzing with so many ideas for projects that I've literally been stunted productivity wise.

Would or anyone be interested in collaborating with me for this? I either want to make this a side story that I can add into the main bit of the story, since Alpha and Omega would be doing there thing while the main chunk of the cast would be doing theres.

Actually, I think that's the best choice! This way I could focus on getting the seventh chapter written with out having to worry about any constraints with my 30 part system. (Where I write a chapter in thirty parts, using the decimal point system if need be).


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1 dr3arms 1 year, 12 months ago Context

OK, I've got this awesome idea about using the letters in the Greek alphabet (31 of the little buggers in all) for characters in a book I'm writing, and I tried dividing them up based on how many letters were in their spelling (2 to 3, 4 to 5, 6 to 7), but, its uneven for me since I don't want it to be a unbalanced or what not.

Another thing was, well, should the group with the least about of characters be the strongest? Or should the characters with the smallest spelling be the strongest? Or should it just be a community thing? Its really irritating to me because usually I can pick these things up right off the bat.

another option I had was trying to figure out was where to actually include this arch into the actually story itself, or write it as a DIFFERENT entity although located with in the same story universe. To be honest, this really has me flustered, and I REALLY don't want another Infinite Web clone.

So what do you guys suggest?


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1 dr3arms 2 years ago Context

I've recently started editing my work before posting it, so let me know the good, the bad, the ugly, and the down right hideous, in that order.


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 1 month ago Context

i agree. if people are nice to me, im nice back, if people are crappy, then im crappy back to them. simple. i have no use for this thread.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

awesome! thanks a bunch!


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

i owe you nothing. nor do i owe anyone anything. i worked my **** off on this site, and ofr some ****s to tell me off is not something i enjoy. now heres the deal, you stop with the hostilities, i stop with the hostilties. that is how ive always been, and that how i work.

if people are nice to me, im nice to them. i speak my mind here, i dont like causing trouble, so please, for the both of us and saving poor katrina some agrivation, knock it off. im aksing nicely because as much as i want to rant at you, i dont have the time.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

ok, thank you!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

thank you... im talking about the map of chapters that usualy display.... its dr3arms... anywho, that usualy displays with the chapter details...


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

i can either be a great friend or something idfferent entirely.


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

ok... i was really hoping to just ask why the tree graph isnt there any more? because thats how i keep track of just how many things ive done... but ill make an acception to you ugly.

a) stfu.
B) im too busy at the moment to answer your questions.
c) so what does it matter where im from or whee i live? if the sites in... wait a tic... when the hell did you read this topic again? i havent paid much attention.

look, if you writers feel great about yourselves so much that you have bother little ol me, whos trying his damndest to leave everyone alone and do his own thing, with out the help of his **** co workers- good for nothings- then, you should work for a newspaper.

i plead the fith to your invasive questions, and disregaurd you as a complete and utter idgit. there ive said my piece.

i waso nly frustrated with the way the payment system was glitching.

hey... hey.... freedom of net speech. so scrag off you little dustbuster.


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-4 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

you know, that name actually suits you? youre a wannabe writer, i know how to market my stories to thep oint where getting paid two bucks is a pretty sweet deal. and whatve you got to show for it?


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

already am. 3 posterous's + 20 twitter accounts + 12 wordpress + 15 blogger + 5 jaiku = a crap load of free press.


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

i am an utter ****.... i apologize, ill have to keep a better eye on the calander... sorry about that... wait this just means ill have a bigger pay out this time around! im going to advertise the hell out of my stories!


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

and i never stated i was angry at the messenger. i simply wanted to know why on a site with so many authors, that there is only one person that oversees the payments. wouldnt haveb een more efficient to have a kind of autopay program going on so that way we dont run into idiots screaming their blithering heads off?

mainly me.


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

sorry bout that, i should have more patience when it comes to the payments, ill have to learn me some etiquette in the forums again. aggloi, jd, dont start. for the love of god, do not start.


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-2 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

WTF IS THE F***KING PROBLEM HERE?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

thanks.


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

stop bitching about it and adapt.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

yeah,,, its pretty much just me at the moment, im continuing chapter one of mechanical hearts, just got inspired!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

and so do i, rightn ow im trying to write two stories at the same time, unlike infiite web, in which we got al ittle overwhelmed... subsequently the others quit because of it... im keeping these as simply as possible.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

thank you katrina! you are the best!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 2 months ago Context

so can someone tell me why the hell that is? i understand it takes a few days and whatn ot, but still, its been a little over a week now, and im starting to get irritated again. do you guys do a bi-weekly payment system?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 3 months ago Context

check it out if you want.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 3 months ago Context

http://storymash.com/u/dr3arms/vihiheri/


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 4 months ago Context

i dont know this idiot.... the other three, edward, delmer, and his brother, i do know...


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 4 months ago Context

and on top of that, id like to add that i dont know either of these two... guys just **** offensive.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 4 months ago Context

you really do hate new accounts dont you? jesus cheese, give her a break ok?


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4 dr3arms 2 years, 5 months ago Context

Ouch... She's right... You ARE **** insane! You do bring up very good points... Disturbing, but good none the less, but I prefer to see the glass as half full, not half empty. I'm sure my friends would agree to some point.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 6 months ago Context

very well written! i like how everything comes together!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 6 months ago Context

thats a wonderfully written chapter! i loved how it rolled and flowed! check out some of mine! by the way, its morgan, lizs friend!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 7 months ago Context

well, still, i need you to be more vigilant.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 7 months ago Context

i know i said i wouldnt use the forums as a sound board, but since the team has gone hoem to be with their loved ones in light of mjs memorial, andi m here by myself, i just wanted to updates a few things.

notes for xdshadowscythe:

i like what your doing with the dinistia series, a bit unorthodox, but theres promise in it. few quick notes though, why is morgan shcizo? i know its your thing to create new characters, but lets try and stick with the cannon shall we?

as for infinite web... i need someone to pick up the slack here guys... i know the demeontes still out with his broken arm, but thats no reason for the two of you to be slacking off, nor myself. so lets just try to get some work done on that.

notes for delmer:

what the flying hell are you going on about? i read your most recent chapter, and im not at all impressed with how your lying about life in the house, were lucky we got those things taken care of... or they jsut took care of themselves. but sitll, ive got a few words for you offline.

notes for demeonte:

your chapter production is low. get back to work, im very unsatisfied with the lack of stuff all three of you are producing.

im not one to talk since my supply of new chapters has been down, but can we all agree to at least get some of the one shots taken care of?


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 7 months ago Context

so in other words, though this event may look massive... and it is... to the human eye, in view of the universe, its nothing more then a microcosm of our very existence.

thanks... i dont feel any better.... but thanks.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 7 months ago Context

thank you! feel free to mash it if you want. i kinda wrote that as a one shot. im not too sure if i want to try to touch such an interesting one shot.


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 7 months ago Context

nice. sorry i didnt get to this sooner. very well writen for a one shot.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 7 months ago Context

well, we try. and wwb? i thank you for the postive insults, but you need to mind your own effing business. ok, its called a rough draft for a reason. if you want to complain about stupid things, then go to you tube.

honey, i was really hoping to wait till i got some feedback from you on the last version, but xd, like a idiot, posted it before i could go through it one more time.

aggeloi?.... i got nothing.

i didnt come here to fight with other writers over stupid things, i came here to write, and thats pretty much it. if you dont like it wwb, then why on gods green earth did you read it in the first place.

of course theres gonna be errors, i wrote it! i asked honey permission first and she gave mthe go ahead, so i did my best. and im happy with the results... the tenses are ****, but nothingsp erfect, is it?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 7 months ago Context

hope you like it storymash!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 7 months ago Context

so.... you went ahead and posted this... after i went to bed? mustve left my laptop on... oh well.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

damn straight! awesome work delmer! why the hell cant you put this much energy into your chapters?


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

10. i distictly remeber ten. but this is nothing compared to xds rants.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

sure thing!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

human disbonding syndrome.... interesting. but more so the fact that everything in this chapter is connected by the net, giving it a sence of reality in a way. and i just sounded retarded right there. but over all, awesome job, cant wait to read the next chapter!


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

delmer, i like how you dont include any other details outside of whats being said. but i would like to see this be a little more fleshedo ut. or is this another one shot?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

this is a work in progress for delmer, a one shot if you will. but i have to agree with you that the storyline itself could use a bit more devolping.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

oh yeah, i almost forgot about this one. check it out! im interested in what your opinion of it is.

http://storymash.com/u/dr3arms/gihinowu/


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

hrm, very direct, very blunt. i suggest you check out my friend xdshadowscythes "a tale of two antons" maybe you two could do a collaboration?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

very good visuals, love the angels and demons bit, the man made god was also a nice touch. although my main thought is with the date in particular, 2012.

isnt that the same date the aztecs predicted the end of the world on there lunar calender? correct me if im wrong.

to me, my mind instantly clicked into the old victorian mansions and victor hugo's "the hunch back of notre dame", very powerful stuff here.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

just a few quick notes, first off, i loved how things just got worse and worse for tommy, loved it!

second off, your lack of commas in the apropriate areas left me questioning how i should read the rest. there was also a lack of question marks, but im just noting these few things.

but overall, i **** loved every sentence. everything just came alive to me, and it read like one of those detective novels too, so that was a major plus!


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

absolutely **** brilliant!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

very well written, i liked the relationship between Charley and his thoughts, the way everything blends together seemlesly is absolute and vivid!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

thanks a bunch! ill defenatley start commenting on others work, ill tell xd about the comments and hell check em out later on when he has the time!


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

http://storymash.com/u/dr3arms/digifefu/

theres the link! check it out now!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

screw blobbiest. were working on this for the time being.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

utter **** this chapter... hopefully it shapes up in the next one or im going to take over.


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

much better! you finaly got all five out there huh? a lot better then the first chapter, but i like the over all tone of it.

just a few notes, i know that this is your colony that we agreed upon and what not. but i just have a few notes.

oxe, the gal with the oxegen producing eyes? a little too convient, but i guessif each eye only produced one hundred feet of oxegen each when there seperate, then it might make a bit more sense. well see how you flesh it out.

are you planning the seperation of the characters any time soon? id like to see some variety soon or at the very least some seperate story lines instead of them being all clumped together.

be more like xd with the way you do things ok? thats all im saying...

but good job over all, it looks to be an exciting chapter, now i need you to post some stuff in demeontes lyrical thing hes got going on if thats cool with you.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

your missing a good story then!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

your missing a good story then!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

i cant wait to see what you come up with, i know that morgan, the beast, nordefet and credion from the dinistia series will play a part, also that the guy from my first story from a drak flare emerges will come into play, ut of the others? lol, i can hardly wait!


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

lol


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-1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

ok thats what i need to do for line breaks then...


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

experiment

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hey guys, i just wanted to thank you for all the hard work youve been doing to let you know that since we live in a friggin old mansion left to me by my dear old uncle... damned thing has literaly got fifty rooms and ten stories below the ground. two above, eight below.

anyways, i just wanted to elt you know that we might be getting two new house mates on the grounds thatll be lving at the guest cottage theyll be primarily helping get story ideas up and running. so it should be fun to see what kinds of things they have planned.

anyways, i was recently on the stories page of sm and i saw that our works has been hiccuped onto the first two pages. im not saying thats a bad thing, i am saying that maybe we need to cut back a little bit on the amount of songs we put up.

just a few more notes to each of you:

first and foremost:

xdshadowscythe, i love what your doing with the clarv, very clever of you to split up the fifty souls like that, i personal love the three chinese warriors going at it in the field and cant wait to see what you come up with for that particular story line.

next up, is delmer. dud, i know youve only been with the team for a little while, but you really need to pick up the pace with creating your own stories. i love the additions to the chatpers and the fact that you put forsth all the hard work you do, but i want to see you create you own stuff. thats all.

last but not least is demeonte. demeonte, demeonte, demeonte... what can i say, i love your lyrics, and also the fact that you split up the massive amount of lyrics between the four of us so that way things get done al ittle bit faster. your work on ti amo was top notch, and the current way your splitting up the fifty souls for the stogh is amazing, but i would really like it if you kinda micro managed it a bit more. character descriptions are very nice, varied. also, same note with delmer.

and thats about it! good work guys! keep it up!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

congrats!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

nice work xd, your really showing some progress! i especially like the fith one you put up.


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

yo writerwannabe, ill cure your thoughts on the ip thing, were all house mates. there that settles that argument. look, if i had known that a lot of people were going to get snippy with me over something so small, then i wouldnt have posted this.

so yeah, we all share the same ip adress but were different people with different personalities. what so wrong with that? last night i got the crap kicked out of me for getting so pissy about the payouts, and for your information, were getting a lot of hits on our stuff, mind you its just spread out.

so what? look this is my way of apologizing, were a tight nit group of friends that like to write. so yeah, im sorry and i like sprinkles too.


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

@xd: i admit nothing!
@delmer: **** you, and the second part, yeah itll give us a lot more plots for us to work with.


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jd, rs, and everyone else, im sorry, its just that i write the way i write because its just how i write. im not one to really apologize for my actions or words, the flame of anger is stil the same, over the payoutsm ind you and nothing else.

i only complained about that and nothing else, and suddenly everyone gets on my case for improper grammar, spelling and everything else? i know about the pay system, every ten days or maybe its fifteen the stats for that get updated.

looking back upon this, i realize that im right at some points and wrong at others. i know that theres a great comunity of writers here with vast wealths of knowledge. xd ill get to you in a second.

outside of xd, demeonte, and delmer, i dont really work well with others, i dont edit my stuff because outside of the nit picker thatll get angry because they cant get through the first sentence with out having a coniption fit... there are intelligent people that will be able to see through the mask of the obvious.

i joined story mash for one reason and one reason only, to get complex storylines done, give my writing style a major tune up in terms of how far i can push the envelope and hopefully make a couple of bucks in the process.

im not looking for friends thatll pat me on the back every time i do a good job, or scorn me everytime they think the stories not oging anywhere.

but if that happens along the way, then all the more for me. its mainly the pay updates im angry with and nothing else. and while i could rant and rave about all the assinign comments ive been getting, i wont. i came here to get stuff done and make money. end of story. orj ust the beginning of it.

xd, i realize that you come from a dark place and you like being all "darkness pleases me" and everything, and ive seen the giant dent ive made. so what? if it invokes a reaction, good or bad, then ive done my job correctly.

im sorry if your pissed at me or angry or whatever, but thems the breaks. and im a guy who sticks to his guns. demeonte or delmer or even xd for that matter, totaly different stories.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

very well written, we could all stand to learn a thing or two from your apparent wealth of skill.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

we should be getting started on this, just as soon as we get done with blobbiest and a few others. sorry for the long wait for new chapters.


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 8 months ago Context

um. rs i have to agree with demeonte on this one. cheeseliker? go like some swiss. or maybe youd perfer some jack instead? i didnt come here to troll the forums, i came here to post stories, make money, and have fun.


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look, i am who i am. im not apologizing for something i said or wrote. if i seem rude to you or anyone else, then i might have a point. true that this place is great, but offline, i spent the better part of my life so far apologizing to everyone for anything stupid i had said. not anymore.
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jd, if you read through any of my stories, youll note that theres a few of them that are a bit disturbing and rude, and there are some where its normal and awesome like. thats how i am. so why hold back online when i dont offline?
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ive got work to do. im a firecracker and a stone in the ocean, i dont move unless i feel like it and if pushed enough times ill explode. not very pretty.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

rsummers, if you wanted to contribure to a project thing i got going called infiite web, then i already have the back story fleshed out all you need to do is write a chapter if you wanted to!
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same thing for you nash! yeah, me, demeonte, xdshadowscythe, and delmer usualy just stick to each others works because we knew each other since middle school, so we have that flow going on. right now though, xds getting married, delmers on a business trip and demeonte is... well... at this point being demeonte. lol.
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thank you for your advice guys! i managed to make 1.41 my first couple of weeks here. plus ive got a whole slew of projects that i need to work on... oi vey. but if you wanted you could contribute a chapter or two to infinite web under one of the four colonies chapters ive created!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

cant you guys and gals get the updates on an automated system? and whats the aproximate amount of days between pay updates? cause this is getting kinda irritating for me.
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i realize that you guys do this manually or something of the like, but could you please get this stats thing on an automated system please?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

i just started a new project story called: infinite web, the charcoaled remains of the promised souls, so feel free to take a stab at that if you want to.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

ive got it setup, adding the first parts for each of the four colonies. this will be interesting.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

to answer your question honey, only if you want to, ive tried my hand at first person writing and its a lot harder then writing third, so essential, what ever perspective you want to write from, your more then welcome to write in such. im just about to get started making the starter for it all.


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0 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

i meant if the character, well cannon as in the fact theyre trapped in the metal sphere for the thousand years that they are and no one escapes from it. thats all.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

i added a chapter a while ago and was thinking about continuing it myself if no one else was going to post anything.


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

hey, just thought i would shoot out an idea for a project i had in mind. anyways, the base line of the series is this:
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200 souls were trapped in a metal sphere for 1000 years, and for 1000 years these souls have had to enure hardships from the very beginning. who was it that put them into the phere, what was the purpose, and most importantly of all, what are the destinies of the souls trapped inside?
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the idea here is to make an intense, action packed, multi level, slightly ramontic, comedic, deep sotyline that will get better with each chapter added.
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there are 200 souls with in the sphere, they can be what ever you want them to be, as long as it remains cannon, if you want them to be male or female, gay, lesbian, or straight, humaniod, animal, insectiod, robotic, undead, then do it, but remember, that whatever character you write, you must stick with it.
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how does it sound to you guys? ill write the starting chapter to set up the back ground and how the scenery looks if you want.


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

yeah, hes a bit gloomy and downright pissy at times, but he gets the job done.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

ah, ok then. thank you for your help!


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anyways... i know, double posting. i have three other friends here that i work closely with ifyou couldnt already tell, there a bit more shy and just about as impulsive as weve got three or four major projects going on.
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as for the paycheck thing, im on paypal and im defenatley close to getting my first little pay. i also noticed that it went from .20 to 1.44 so i must be doing something good you know? and it takes about ten days for things to get updated, so now i know. lol.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

lmao, thank you, ill defenatley keep this in mind.


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

good to have you on board demeonte! from what ive seen, youll make and excellent addition to the team!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

cant wait to get sogno trono started! delmer, would you make a root so that way you can import all of the dinistia stuff we got down so far?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

ok i checked out the earnings page for the fifth day this month, andi ts still at .20 in the earnings... so whats up? shouldnt it have gone up or something by now?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

its cool!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

ouch.... like how low?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

ok awesome! whats the coinage to click ratio?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

your welcome!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

when are our statistics updated?


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

yeah, im just importing a lot of stuff from past accounts that are close to being shut down on my end, so this really helps me out in the end. thanks for the advice jdr!


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

my friend signed up and were in the process of getting a book published, and hes more of a skeptic then i am, trust me, i love this site and wouldnt be posting something like this normally. so i posted this for my friends sake.
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thanks for confirming what i already knew.


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2 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

sorry, i just wanted to make sure that this site was completely legit. i am a bit of a skeptic. its good to know that it isnt a back stabbing site. you have my support.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

so whats up with not tellin us?


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3. Rights Granted.
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when boiled down equals the below

They can take any work you put on there, and use it in any way they want, anywhere they want and as much as they want for as long as they want without letting you know about it and without your consent.

so shouldnt we be notifed if our content is being used by the site? as well as you asking our permission if its ok? and you guys should really fix that so we can know whato ur works going into, what its being used for, how its being used and so on and so forth. also, you really need to raise the amount per click to 0.005 cents per read if you guys are going to doing something like that. and let us know and ask for permission.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

going in order of series:
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1. SPACE PRIRATE CEREVANTES DE GRANDE:
drunk logs:
1.2. friday, january 19, 2346
sober entries:
1.3. wedsday, january 3, 2346
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2. OKC IM STORIES:
2.3. blobbiest bitch chapter 3: WAND, MAKE MY FAT CHICK GROW!
2.2. ballins mouth chapter 3: meet barney fife
2.1. red rumone chapter 3: OUCH!?
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3. INFINITO SENTIERO:
3.1 EXTRA chapter 12
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CHECK THEM OUT!!!!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

thanks a bunch!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

i just wanted to know the limit of chapters that a person write per day? becuase i needed to get that straightened out? i was checking it out and i was able to post at certain times. also, is it time sensitive? or number of posts per day? last i checked i was able to post 3-4 chapters a day, and i think at one point, 6. could someone help meo ut here? id really be thankfull for your help.


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UPDATES! FIRST PARTS OF THE FOLLOWING:

RED RUMONES ANAL EXPERIENCE!
THE BALLS IN BALLING MOUTH!
GALATIC CAPTIANS LOG OF CEREVANTES!


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UPDATES! FIRST PARTS OF THE FOLLOWING:

RED RUMONES ANAL EXPERIENCE!
THE BALLS IN BALLING MOUTH!
GALATIC CAPTIANS LOG OF CEREVANTES!
INFINITO SENTIERO!


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

cause i kinda **** up by making too many new stories instead of just branching them out at the beginning.


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

if we close our account, do our stories get deleted also?


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

check em out! the titles are, and they are NOT porn, but they are mature... and mostly involve varying degrees of prison rape by zombies, gorillas, garret byrne, barney fife, bob sagget, dinosaurs, black scorpions, the govenator, carrot top, the hulk, ghost rider, christian bale, and some other things. but there is a story line to it... i think.

anyways, the series title is called OKC IM stories. and the series stories are as follows:

1. red rumones anal experience (not porn)
2. the balls in ballins mouth (not porn... but funny as hell)
3. what is a cazul
4. the blobbiest bitch ever


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

check em out! the titles are, and they are NOT porn, but they are mature... and mostly involve varying degrees of prison rape by zombies, gorillas, garret byrne, barney fife, bob sagget, dinosaurs, black scorpions, the govenator, carrot top, the hulk, ghost rider, christian bale, and some other things. but there is a story line to it... i think.

anyways, the series title is called OKC IM stories. and the series stories are as follows:

1. red rumones anal experience (not porn)
2. the balls in ballins mouth (not porn... but funny as hell)
3. what is a cazul
4. the blobbiest bitch ever


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1 dr3arms 2 years, 9 months ago Context

Anyways, hello Storymash! My name's Morgan Gavin AKA Dr. 3 Arms, which ever is easier for you to remember. Anyways, here's a list of my work on SM thus far. Please read them and let me know what you think! Also, if you think you can continue the series, go for it! The completed ones are off limits though. Just remember to follow the rules of each story world and you be fine.

Here's a key to help you all out:

# = series title
#.# = series story
(completed) = its up there and i cant do anything about it.

List of series and either chapter names or stories within the series:

1. Sogno Della Dinistia:
1.1. Divertente Della Amuleto (completed)
1.2. Infinito Sentiero (completed)

2. The Debate Of Factions (incomplete but readable)
2.1. Past (prequel to the sequel)
2.2. Present (sequel to the prequel)
2.3. Future (epilogue to the sequel of the prequel)

3. The Galactic Captains Log Of The Insane Space Pirate Cerevantes De Grande (personal pet project, HANDS OFF!):
3.1. Drunk entries
3.2. Sober entries

4. One shots:
4.1. Mechanical hearts
4.2. Pain
4.3. Angels heart and demons mind

I'll be keeping the list updated from time to time just to keep up with things. I also do collaborations on yahoo messenger. My yahoo ID is enigmatt2002@yahoo.com, messege me with any ideas you might have.


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