Discussion of "Operation double-stuff" by dogdeity11

Great Rugrats vein! Nail bitingly soft!

love it.

This is hilarious.

Oh, the cuteness! It burns like the blistering sun of a summer afternoon on the pallid skin of a net addict forced to make that hated trek to the mailbox.

Your device of having something that starts out looking sinister reveal itself mundane works perfectly- very funny! Good character voice and pacing.

It would be interesting to see you craft a novel with various perspectives. Juxtaposing something like this with some of your darker chracters would be jarring and edgy... if you could convince someone to publish something original (which is hard), it would probably be a hit.

FYI- I came back to read your continuation, but found you had abandoned this work. That's ok. I looked forward to reading more, but it works as a stand alone very well. I'm a bit disappointed, but I can see why you allocate your resources to more involved endeavors.