Discussion of "Day 11: Superhero (2)" by dogdeity11

Nice! 5 from me Dog, I really love your additions. bravo!

Another brilliant installation! Bravo!!!

Excellent job!

Wow, thanks for the comments. I didnt expect this branch to get read much. I appreciate you taking the time!

Geez Dude, way to jerk some tears. Magnificently written, though it seems the story has stalled unfortunately. As always, I'm impressed by your astonishing ability to capture a scene. I'm downright jealous in fact.

Just thought maybe it would be day 14, since he was in the church on day 10 and then broke up the bank robbery and disappeared for a few days. Only thing I could see that could use some explanation.

HA! Great call Jackoalltrades. I completely overlooked that. Should have been day 11-14.
Truthfully I didnt expect many people to read this branch of the storyline. I only posted it because I had already written it and didnt want it to go to waste. It's strange because far more people have read and left really positive feedback on the the other branch, yet this one has a higher voting rating. go figure.
I guess whoever is next can continue which ever one they want.
I really appreciate you taking the time to vote and comment.

I've followed this thread off and on and thought I should say..I loved both the Superhero chapters. Interesting twists. Very Very well-written. I like most of what you write though I may not leave comments always. :)

Thanks for the feedback VinnieP! Whether you leave comments in the future or not it's really great to know that your reading! I really appreciate it.

I just read this dog.....even though it was not meant for the addition, you always give the reader something to look forward to in your work. you truly are amazing.